New Slide

Posted by Kevin Courtney in Technology- Freshmen - Hull on Thursday, January 24, 2013 at 11:14 am

As you can see my slide is totally different from the very first one I did. In my first slide I did somewhat of a collage. As you can see now my slide is not a collage. Even though my name is not big as people told to make it bigger, but I wanted it like that. I'm saying that because look at the big baseball player. Now look at his arm with his glove in it. The glove is actually pointing at my name. This will catch everyones' eyes. So thats why I made my name in that size. I hope you guys are interested in my new and improved slide.

Comments (6)

Ilker Erkut

This slide is very good and gets the point across. Maybe you could have added a picture of yourself as well somewhere in there.

Jordan Meriwether

This slide (compared to your original) is much neater and much more controlled. Also, apear to have been able to capture you interests in a small shot. I just wish you could have incorporated bowling since you like that to, this does not tell much about you.

Tenzin Chemi

I really think this slide has made a lot of improvements. I get the idea that you are trying to get across.

Jada Terrell

I like how this focuses on one sport so it doesn't confused the reader on what is most important to you. I think it is okay that your name isn't that big because it is still an accurate size and it's the same color as the guys shirt so it matches and catches the eye.

Adnan El-Bedawi

I like how you really put the information ou learned to use in the slide. Also, it's easier for me to understand the fact that you're really into baseball from your slide than the last one =).

Malwina Dymek

I think the changes you made in your second slide make your slide more interesting and I also think the idea with glove pointing to your name is great. :)