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The title of the book I read was called Double Dutch by Sharon M. Draper. She is mainly an author for teen books. Sharon M. Draper is an award winning author. She has been on the New York Times bestsellers list for the book “ Copper Sun”. Sharon M. Draper is also a Coretta Scott King award winner for the books such as “Copper Sun” in 2007” and ” We beat in the Street”. Also in 1998 she wrote “Forged by Fire” which was also an award winner for the Coretta Scott King award.
This book is about a girl named Delia Douglas. She has a passion for double dutch. Delia, her friends Yolanda and Charlene attended on competing in the World double dutch Championship. The World double dutch championship is when kids all over the world from places such Taiwan, Germany and Canada face off in a battle to win first place. Delia practices at the YMCA gym with Yolanda. Delia notices a boy name Randy, he’s in her class. they both have one thing in common.
As they interact with each other inside and outside of school they gain a bond with each other. Never the less to say that neither one of the has exposed their secret to one another. The conflict in the story is person Vs. Person. I believe this because in the story you Have a boy named Randy who would be her potential boyfriend and a Girl named Delia. They both share the same interest. Each one has a secret that neither are willing to share upfront. But in the end they conquer their fears and give in. Randy discovers Delia’s secret, she can’t read. Delia discovers randy’s secret, His dad was missing for weeks and haven’t heard from him since.
Over all my favorite character is Delia because she shows courage. From this book you will take away that “ the road remains wide open, while your dreams are alive . Only fear can block the way. “ ( "The road remains wide open . . . rainbow by halfpasteleven on Etsy." Etsy - Your place to buy and sell all things handmade, vintage, and supplies. N.p., n.d. Web. 6 June 2013. <http://www.etsy.com/listing/102018796/the-road-remains-wide-open-rainbow . ) Fear has two meanings 1.) Forget Everything And run or 2.) Face Everything And Rise. The choice is yours.
I do not believe I can relate to this book because I never really Had a something that I was ashamed of. Yes, I have had fears but I had conquer them. For example I used to be scared of getting on rollercoasters. Then when I first got on one I was so scared. but afterwards I felt the rush and now i’m not scared anymore. So Actually I can conclude I can relate.
Overall i thought the book was Excellent. Strong points of the book would be how the characters were portrayed. Each character created the right amount of suspense. You could also understand and identify the characters personality. However it lacks in humor. Setting a tone for a book is very important because a reader will pick up the theme or message when everything is properly balanced.
I would highly recommend this book. Especially to teens how do not read enough because if you set time aside for just reading for 20 minutes a day. I assure you that you will feel glad that you did it.
Jayd Jackson is a 16 year old who is the main character of the book. Her story starts when she goes back to school to South Bay High aka Drama High. She lives with her grandmother who is one of the many Louisiana conjure women which means she has powerful powers from Louisiana gods. Jayd has a lot of drama in her life because her grandmother is a conjurer and her next door neighbor is a evil voodoo queen who wants to take Jayd’s powers for her own. The drama is worse in school. It’s close to Valentines Day, and love is in the air sort of speak. Jayd has to face the fact that her crew is falling apart and her frenemy Misty is getting help from her evil next door neighbor. Jayd will need more than her inner strength. She'll need the help of her gifted ancestors, to save herself and her crew.
I can relate to this book because it seems like my life is always filled with drama. My mom thinks it’s because I don't mind my own business which is somewhat the case, but at the same time people tell me everything and then it just goes downhill from picking sides or friends being mad at the other. At home it’s not as bad because my grandmother isn’t my main care taker. I live with my mom and she’s around when I need her. My relationship with my dad is like Jayd’s. I can’t say I hate my dads side of the family because I don’t really know them but my dad wasn’t really around he was in Ohio for 13 out of 15 years of my life. Sometimes he does try to be a dad but it doesn’t work out the way I want it to and it’s the same way with her dad.
Another thing is Jayd cares a lot about her grades and friends. Like with me my school grades are a lot more important than buying new things or the new show on tv. It’s hard for Jayd because she also has a soft side for her friends. She feels like she always have to fix things because she’s the only mature on of the group. No one else wants to grow up and try to fix things. When her to main concerns start to mess up it becomes too stressful to think and you just want to crawl back into the bed. I can relate to that, I really do care for my friends if one of them is hurt I’m always there but it seems like no one there for me. It’s the same way for Jayd the only person who understands all her stress is her grandmother and ex boyfriend who is in his own world.Over all Holidaze was a good /interesting book. I’m a sucker for drama books, mysteries occasionally I like horror and romantic books. I love the Drama High series once I start reading the book I can’t get enough of it. I have actually recommended the series to two of my friends who have also enjoyed the books. I want to keep reading the series until I finish all the books. The one thing I think can be cut back on is Jayd’s powers. I think it’s great she has them but her and her grandmothers traditions go against my religion. Sometimes it’s a lot to read about and it’s the same thing, I want something fresh. That little problem still doesn’t stop me from reading my book. When I’m done the series I’m going to wait for the 16th book in the meantime I am going to be reading The Other Boleyn Girl, I will be writing a book review for that so stay tuned. Book cover is shown below
I recommend this book for people teens and young adults of the age 13-20. Adults can read it because my mom enjoy the books too but it reaches out to kids in high school. This can be for both genders but it seems like girls would understand the drama that’s in the book. To boys it would probably be silly the stuff they fight about in the book. Overall this book is good for people who can tolerate cliffhangers and don’t mind reading more than one book to get to the ending. It’s a romantic drama for teens. If you give it a rating it’s rated P.G 14 it has it’s moments where it gets graphic with violence and the language. It’s a book that will keep you reading because you want to hope that Jayd will get a better life outside of South Bay High. The first book in the Drama High series is The Fight.
For my creative project I made a prezi that shows how Jayd overcame her obstacles that kept her from her mission.The Full Spectrum
Have you ever observed your life? Looked at anyone else's? Well, it's time to take a view of, "The Full Spectrum." The book, "The Full Spectrum," is by several different authors, edited by David Levithan and Billy Merrell. The book is about a, "new generation of writing about gay, lesbian, bisexual, transgender, questioning, and other identities." The best seller rank for, "The Full Spectrum," ranks 847,611 on Amazon.com.
The book, "The Full Spectrum," is an amazing book. It is a book based on short stories about teens. This book tells stories about the experience about teenagers who experience problems about different situations. Mainly, it focuses on the sexuality. There are several stories told that catch my eye. All are interesting and each have their own mind. Every new story told is a way for each author to express themselves. Most of the stories are conflicts having to do with person versus self, and person versus society. Interestingly enough, it seems like they all overcome.
The main characters are very interesting and different, but all seem to have the same thing in common. Most of their problems stem from either family or how society view them. The stories are of teens who are gay and need a way to express themselves. They get this done by telling their story. My favorite memoir is by Stefanie Davis and it is called, “ All you need is love.” This story is about a girl witnesses her family adjusting to her sister becoming a transgender. She doesn’t know whose side to take. She wants to please her mom and dad, who hates the idea, but she also wants to support her sister. It catches my eye because this is a real life thing and it makes me sad. Everyone does need love no matter what. Her sister was denied that, but she stuck by her side.
I related to, “The Full Spectrum,” in so many ways. I know people who have gone through the same experiences. It is both sad, but also interesting because you get to see and watch people overcome their struggles, but they also get mistreated along the way. Not only that, but I saw my old best friend go through this second hand. No I did not go through it, but I was there for her. This made it hard for the both of us, but we both were able to become aware of what the situation was. My own self? I have experienced some of these things, but I will not go any further than that.
In all honesty, I loved the entire book. Every story I read had me either in tears or laughing the entire time. It was so delicious to read these stories and get to see these things. If I could, I would not change anything about this book. I wouldn’t because if I did, it would not be the same stories. It shouldn’t even need to be changes. I would recommend this to anyone. The entire book was good. I don’t care who you are, you would relate to this book. It was great, so if you’re looking for something interesting, “The Full Spectrum,” is the book.
The Secret: My Secret
My Secret,
The One that holds me back,
The One that no one knows,
Except the friends I’ve told.
Not even my mother,
Nope not at all.
I feel that this secret is not me,
But, yet a phase.
One that will go away,
Just a feeling in the moment.
But, the feeling, it overshadows me.
Keeping me in the dark and not wanting to come out.
My thoughts, they’re mines,
But it takes over when the oppurtunity presents,
When it presents, it wins,
All the time.
No, I am not ready to accept my secret,
The Lie that I tell myself everyday.
You probably no by now,
But, I am still not ready to share.
To me my secret is an untold truth,
But a lie to myself being.
It may be true,
But, right now, I am not ready to accept, “The Secret.”
My
capstone addresses the SLA core values in many ways. For one, collaboration was
a major, if not integral, portion of my capstone. It was often necessary to
reach out to coworkers to give feedback on my proposal as well as research
paper. I also had to gain the backing of a knowledgeable team. With a great
team behind me, it was easy to move forward with conducting our research.
Another very important piece of this project was research. Countless hours were
spent understanding the water hyacinth plant, removal and disposal methods, and
its anatomy. This information was vital to properly conducting the project.
Understanding the growth pattern of water hyacinth along with the tidal
patterns of the Delaware made conducting research easier. In terms of the value
of presentation and reflection, a great deal of attention was paid to the
detail within the research paper. After reading some other published research
papers on water hyacinth and its applications, I made sure that my paper was
read over by many pairs of eyes. This ensured the quality of the project was
evident in its documentation.
To
complete this capstone, four steps were followed. Research, comprehension,
application, reflection. These steps were used countless times during the
process of my capstone. Research was used to layer the basic understanding of
all elements incorporated into my capstone. From understanding scientific
measurements of the biology of a river to using probes for water quality
testing. This research was often revised and revisited. Comprehension played a
key role in the project. After conducting all the necessary research, the team
got together to ensure that all information was not only relevant, but that it
could also help us to direct our study areas to those in which finding/identifying
water hyacinth would be possible. This step was also used to devise the course
maps for the project. Application was the manifestation of our research and
planning. We took everything that we learned and went into the field to collect
our data. Over the course of two days, the team managed to visit 6 different
sites. Three sites were on the New Jersey side of the Delaware River while the
other 3 were on the Pennsylvania side. These sites were chosen after careful
deliberation with the project team. We ensured that all sites had a relative
proximity as well as being easy to navigate to. Reflection was the final step
in completing this capstone. Reflecting on the team’s work, it was evident that
our research could have a long term impact in the quality of our river. After
conducting the project, it was evident that we needed to reach out to other
agencies to ensure that the right people were aware that water hyacinth may
have spread to Pennsylvania as well as New Jersey.
One
major obstacle that presented the project team early on were the effects of the
sequestration. Due to the sequestration, it was unclear at times whether or not
the research project would be able to move forward. Another factor that
affected the project was the equipment needed. The boat that was set to be used
had not yet undergone its inspection and checklist. For this reason, the course
map was redrawn to allow us to visit sites in which we knew water hyacinth
could exist while having access to the shore. In the end, these two factors caused
the project to be conducted from shore instead of using the boat. During the course
of the project, there were often many a time in which other knowledge bases
were needed. Often, I tapped in to my coworkers. They proved invaluable with a plethora
of information about conducting research projects, writing a clear research
paper, and quality assurance standards to use while conducting research.
I
am most proud of the experience given by this capstone. Most students in high
school do not get to conduct their very own research project. Having the experience
of conducting and leading a research team for a project was very exciting. It
showed me a lot about collaboration as well as effective use and consolidation
of resources. When we found that we could not use a specific program or tool,
we quickly turned gear to find another way of doing things. This project has
also taught me a lot about environmental science as a major. It gave me a
deeper understanding to the things that environmental scientist and engineers
do on a daily basis. If I could do this capstone over again, I would change the
timespan of the project. Having the research conducted in two days was
sufficient for the scale of this project however, with a greater timespan, we
could most likely get more locations surveyed.
My
capstone has made SLA a better place because of the people that I have
inspired. When underclassmen would ask me about my capstone, they were
instantly intrigued that I got to lead and conduct a research project. This
also allowed me to network people to bring about more resources and materials
for science learning at SLA.
Medullary
Thyroid Carcinoma (MTC) originates from mutations in calcitonin-producing
parafollicular C cells of the thyroid, is a rare malignancy, accounting for
3-4% of all thyroid carcinomas. It occurs in a hereditary form (HMTC, 25%) or
in a sporadic form (SMTC, 75%). The prognosis for patients with MTC is poor, as
the tumor metastasizes at early stages; and the only curative therapeutic
option so far is radical surgery. Genetic analysis helps identify inherited
cases at a stage where prophylactic surgery can be offered to carriers of such
mutations to prevent the disease. This approach may also be used to determine
better treatment options for patients who are already diagnosed with MTC.
The goal of
this project was to develop a comprehensive mutational panel for the detection
of clinically relevant mutations in MTC samples. A total of 143 mutations
(nucleic acid variations) in 8 human genes were selected from numerous papers
and public databases and included into the MTC mutational panel. The selection
criteria were based on the coding mutations (mutations that occur in the coding
area of the genes) that were reported to occur in MTC patients and considered
functionally relevant. Some of the mutations included into the MTC mutational
panel (such as BRAF gene V600E mutation) were also described in other types of
thyroid cancer, but most of the mutations were unique to MTC (such as all RET
gene mutations). The entire assay design was carried out using Sequenom's
online design tools (ProxSNP and PreXTEND (https://www.mysequenom.com/Tools)
and Assay Design software (v. 3.1)).
The final file comprised from 115
assays corresponding to all 143 mutations included into the MTC panel. This
file will be further processed using the SEQUENOM® Mass-ARRAY iPLEX® platform
for DNA genotyping of clinical samples by the cancer research scientists at the
Abramson Cancer Center of the University of Pennsylvania
Save
for Anaplastic Thyroid Carcinoma (ATC), MTC is the second most aggressive type
of thyroid cancer. Hereditary mutations that could lead to HMTC need to be found
as rapidly as possible, as the onset age is only 5. This Mutational Panel is
one of the best ways to diagnose any type of MTC, be it hereditary or sporadic,
and give a small beam of hope to the poor person diagnosed with the mutation.
The
decision to make this panel was a hard one, as at the time that I started it, I
was going to take pre-calculus in Drexel University. It was an insane amount of
work, but I managed to compile the list of mutations over the summer, and
continue the analysis during autumn. The actually write-up was finished much
later, when I decided that I could use that project as my capstone.
Simply
put, the project was not easy. It took me a long time to understand the basics,
and even a longer time to be able to manipulate small details, but in the end,
the project was amazing. I have to say, that out of all the work I did while I
was in SLA, this capstone project is the one I am proud of the most!
B. Explain how you found negative space in 1. your cut out?, 2. in your still life drawing?
I found negative space in my cut out by tracing over the picture onto the paper. I found my negative space in my still life drawing by drawing the object first and then shading all of the space around the drawing and then erasing the lines from the drawing.C. Why does it help an artist to see in negative space?
Its helpful for an artist to see in negative space because then it will enhance his sketching skills.D. Does seeing in negative space enhance drawings, why or why not?
Seeing in negative space does enhance drawings because it helps you focus more on the outline sketch first and then you can focus on the details later.Of all of the characters in the story, I could relate most of all to Phoebus, the promiscuous soldier. Don’t get me wrong, I do not relate to him because we are both promiscuous; I can relate to him because when he is among the beautiful, rich and fancy ladies, he feels very uncomfortable, even though he was raised very properly. He feels more comfortable speaking roughly, dressing casually, and interacting with the average people. I went to a private Jewish school for ten years and now that I have finally left, I will always feel out of place with my friends that still go to private Jewish schools. The way Phoebus feels is nearly exactly the same way that I have grown to feel nowadays. It’s not that I have a preference for people who are not “rich and Jewish”, but it’s just simpler and more fun for me to hang out with other kinds of people too.
My favorite character is easily Claude Frollo. Claude Frollo is my favorite character for only two reasons. Firstly, I find it mind-blowing that a person can transform from such a compassionate and eager-to-learn young man to a twisted and impudent man. He used to study tirelessly at the University; he adopted his younger brother at the age of 16 because their parents had died (due to the plague); and on top of that, he took in the discarded child, Quasimodo, and raised him and loved him as his own. Then, once his boys grow up, he turns to studying alchemy in the tall towers of the cathedral, Notre-Dame. Now he rarely emerges from his workspace. When people try to speak to him, he is often unresponsive or just rude and frightening. The only exception to this kind of behavior is Quasimodo; I think this is because they both receive hostility from the people of Paris. The second reason that I enjoy Claude Frollo so much is because he is so complex and unbelievable intelligent.
Finally, I think this book is fantastic, and I would strongly recommend it to anybody who is willing to deal with the somewhat tedious writing style of Victor Hugo. The only (minor) issue that I found with this book is that it had a bit too much historical narration for my taste. At the beginning I felt that it was tough to read through all of the non-fiction, but I did it anyway because I really wanted to get to the rest of the story. It was undoubtedly worth the strain. In conclusion, this is a marvelous story filled with intricately built characters as well as a beautifully written description of the setting. This book is great for anybody who is prepared and eager to read the story despite the slightly tiresome historical reports.
Ned Vizzini’s It’s Kind of a Funny Story is a deft, eloquent, and riotously funny novel about a not so humorous topic – the crippling effects of depression. Inspired by the author’s own experience during his five-day stay in a New York psychiatric hospital, this book was published in 2006. He was only twenty-five. A major Hollywood film of the same name staring Keir Gilchrist, Dana DeVestern, and Zach Galifianakis was released four years later.
It’s Kind of a Funny Story tells the story of Craig Gilner, a driven teenage growing up in Manhattan. Ever since he was young child, he knew exactly what he wanted to be - he was going to be the president of America. He is a conscientious worker; and because of his ambition and this hard work he is able to get admitted into Manhattan’s most exclusive school and labor intensive, the Executive Pre-Professional High School, which is full of some of the most precocious children of his age. Even though Craig convinces himself that this was what he wants, he finds that in this new school he is struggling to just keep up with the rest of the pack. His best friend, Aaron, on the other hand, got into the school without even trying.
Craig feels anguish as everything starts to pile up on him - schoolwork, extracurriculars needed to get into a decent college, social obligations, and guilt because of what he is putting his family through. Could he possibly get into a decent college or even make it through high school? This anxiety continues to grow in cycles until his life gets turbulent and it becomes to be too much to bear. Craig becomes suicidal. Fortunately, Craig has the good sense to check himself into a psychiatric hospital before it is too late. Here he finally feels safe. There is a sense of stability here that anchors him to reality, something he was unable to find in the outside world. He feels in control. The hospital is his bulwark against his depression. In this environment he is finally able to piece everything together, to brood constructively. He connects to the others in the ward because even though they are of all different ages and have different troubles in their pasts they are all going through rough times and are able to help each other get through them.
In the hospital he meets many people who proved to be true friends, the most prominent of which is Noel. Noel has the same problem as Craig, which is revealed to us by the scars on her cheek. Both Craig and Noel are teenagers struggling under the weight of adolescence and the expectations and labels that society has placed on them. This is a bond that cannot be broken. It is what makes this story so powerful in addition to being witty.
This is an excellent book for teenage readers trying to make sense out of what it means to be a unique and complex individual and how we can navigate between our expectations and reality. Life can be fraught with danger and pretty scary at times, but if Craig Gilner can tame his pernicious demons, I think that we, too, should be able give it a good shot. If we can accomplish this self-discovery with half the humor of the narrator, we will be doubly successful. The novel feels like a genuine rendition of a teenager’s experience. This made the characters and emotions relatable giving the book an extremely powerful message. Other than modifying some annoying colloquial phrases that seem forced, I wouldn’t change a thing. If you like heavy topics dealt with in a light-hearted and witty way It’s Kind of a Funny Story is a must read. I for one strongly recommend it.
For my last Independent Reading Project for Mrs. Dunn I read Speak by Laurie Halse Anderson. This book was first published in 1999. Laurie Halse Anderson was awarded many awards for her books and this book as well. The awards were Printz Honor Book Award, a National Book Award nomination, Golden Kite award, the Edgar Allan Poe Award, and the Los Angeles Times Book Prize.Speak touches on many problems in a teenagers life. Struggles with school, friends, parents and pernicious rumors. Throughout Speak you find that being an outcast isn’t good nor is it healthy. It makes you feel unwanted and most times makes you go into a deep depression.
Melinda Sordino, the main characters, struggles with being an outcast. Speak is about her life, her story, but it’s all up to her if she wants to tell it. It all began at a party when she called the cops at the end. The reason is because she didn't feel secure when she was with Andy Evans. The beginning of high school her friend circle was desolate.This made her fraught with anger which sent her down into a spiral. But she had art. She could express herself in Art and that was the only class she received an A in. The project she received for the year was a tree. This tree later symbolizes Melinda's growth to over come her fears and speak up about the night of the party.
I could relate to this story because I know how important socializing is to a high schooler. It may not be important to all kids but to most it is. Feeling wanted it is the best feeling. To know that someone actually cares about you besides your family and God. Being accepted, knowing people, going places, and having friends feels perfect. But you have the pick the correct people and you also have to learn for yourself who people are and how they affect you.
I liked Speak because it touched upon a serious topic that young woman and woman go through. I also liked the book because it was structured well and written well. It’s suspenseful and makes it easy to read and want to read the whole book in one day. For me reading a book in one day seems boring but this book made it easy to complete the task. Like any other book Speak had some weaknesses. The biggest weakness was the way the book was sectioned. I understand each marking period to show growth but it wasn’t necessary. There was a strength also. The strength of the book was the way it was written. Laurie Halse Anderson gave a lot of details that helped understand the situation Melinda was in.
I recommend this book for teens who want a good story to read.Speak is a very interesting book. It's not a typical book about a girl in high school. It's not about treachery, or jealousy. It's about a normal girl who is hiding a secret because she can't tell anyone. Speak is a sapid and genuine novel. It touches upon topics that people don’t like talking about. This book is easy to get attached to and you can begin to feel how Melinda feels.
Taylor Washington
6-6-13
Orange Stream
A generation of writing about gay,
lesbian, bisexual, transgender,
questioning, and other identities.
One of my favorite short stories/ journal in this book is “When you’re a gay boy in america” by Danny Zaccagnino. His section had an very engaging story about the way gay people are treated by society. When Danny was a young boy his boy scout counselor told him he was not a true scout.
Danny also shares about his tattoo on his back and what it symbols while also explaining how the same pain from the tattoo reminded him of the pain he went through for being a gay man. His tattoo is a dragon. The dragon represents a protector that will always have his back. But thats just one interesting story in the book of a teenager that went through plenty of struggle because of his sexuality.
Personal Experiences
I can somewhat relate to The Full Spectrum because a lot of these struggles I have witnessed happen to others as they were trying to come out of there shell if being “Straight” and being the sexuality of their choosing.
Opinion?
Yes I will love this book till death bring us apart, because one of the biggest strengths of this book is each journal entry they are all so unique it's almost like reading someones secret diary. If I could change any aspect of the book it would be to have sections for each theme of the book so that you kind of had a clue of what you were about to read.
Recommendations??
Yes I would definitely recommend this book to anyone who is mature enough to be able to have a sort of understanding of the fact that the stories in this book are very extreme on the way people put there feeling out there. These teens deserve respect.
V for Vendetta by Alan Moore and David Lloyd is a powerful dark storytelling book
that is about a city in London that lost it’s freedom and being ruled by this computer who is
used by the dictator of England also known as “fate” then a camp survivor that scaped and
name himself as “V” wants to give the freedom and equal rights to the civilians by killing
people who are in power and also people who were part of the camp where the used to
torture/experiment with people where the main character “V” escaped from.
There are two main characters in the book V for Vendetta who are V and Eve this two characters each have a background about what happened, The character “V” was captured in a camp and his room number was 5 which is where he got his name; this happened around the 1970’s there was a war involving London England and the government of London got completely wiped out by people with a lot of power who later on became into a dictatorship and after they
got their power, the Dictator Susan or fate who is a guy made all the asian, Blacks, gays
to go to camp’s where they would torture them and test experiments.
Experiment 5 “V” got captured during this movement of dictatorship and was sent to camps over the time the test subjects would die slowly while V was still somehow immune to this
injections and toxins that were put in his body, he had a doctor that would often check on him
and write down on his journal saying that when he looked at V she would feel like V was
feeling pity about all of the scientist making experiments on people, over the time the
doctor would give him materials to V to make his flowers grow but one day V used
the materials to make an explosion and escaped.
After V escape he goes around the city of London saving people and helping citizens
rebel against the city ruled by a dictator, during his journey he basically he blows up
certain buildings that are connected to the main computer in the dictators office and after
he does that he kills the people that were in the camps that tortured people, also he went
after the most wealthiest people that work in the government or that were linked to
the dictator.
In conclusion I think this book was one the greatest book or graphic novels I have ever read
It has a good story telling and it’s very gripping because as soon as you start reading it
you want to know what’s going to happen next and how everything is going to go down.Joseff Filamor
June 4, 2013
Independent Reading Book: Yesterday Erased
Yesterday Erased by Andrew Schrock follows young teenager by the name of Drew Thomas. Throughout the book it shows Drew’s transformation from a comic-book nerd, to a member of the Cincinnati skateboarding scene. The book starts out by him writing to himself while he is alone at a party, sitting on a couch. He writes about how he came to be what he is today and slowly begins to review his life all the way back to being 14, which is where the book truly begins. First, it shows how Drew comes to be a skater, and then slowly shows his interest in girls and the party life. As he is crossed between staying true to skateboarding or joining his delinquent friends, he searches for the way he best fits in and most enjoys.
The author if this book; Andrew Schrock based Yesterday Erased off of his life growing
up. This was actually the first piece of real writing he has ever written, he quotes “This is my first piece of true writing. As I can remember, I only wrote half of a term paper in high school.” Andrew Schrock is not only an author, he also owns and operates his own skateboard company; ReVive skateboards, and he is also a YouTube partner that delivers videos daily.
I have been following Andrew Schrock for four years now, and I am proud to say that he is one of my idols to look up too. For four years, Schrock has been delivering skateboard videos of himself and his friends and has also been making video on the right choices to make in life, in other words; how to stay positive and never give up. When he first started, he had to work 3 jobs including making YouTube videos on the side. After a year of making videos, he became a YouTube partner and began to make money from every video he made, he was then able to quit two of the jobs he had. From the years of following him, I have watched him gain not only a major amount of popularity and respect, but also has made enough money off YouTube to
support his fiance and newborn son. He now has gained so much popularity over YouTube
that he was able to quit the other jobs he had.
In Yesterday Erased, he describes his life as a kid then growing up all the way to the point of him being twenty years old. Him being an actual skater in real life, he talks about real skateboarding, and what an everyday life of a skateboarder is truly like. I may have said this in my last independent book review, but this one is truly relatable. It may be based off skateboarding, but it also focuses on the social status of an everyday teenager. Partying, girls, and seeking the sense of respect and belonging.
Considering all of the positive feedback I recently stated, there is one con to the book; it goes very fast. Through the first chapter, he does not give a lot of background knowledge about who he is prior to his skate life. He writes about his everyday life; going to school, then going to the comic shop, go home and play videogames, then repeat. His daily agenda gets to be a little
too repetitive and redundant without any other side information.
Further more after that, Drew begins to shift into finding himself and slowly makes
friends that he can all relate too. Basing his character off Drew Thomas, Andrew Schrock writes his life through his perspective without almost no flaws. It is a fast read with plenty of
cliffhangers in each chapter and relatable teenage trauma. Definitely one to order and read for yourself, you will not regret it!
~Joseff
Below is a video link to AndrewSchrock’s youtube video talking about his book. He discusses why he wrote, how, and what point in his life he was in at the time. Enjoy!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x35lHs7ey1gIn the town of Piedmont, a satellite crashes, but the heat shield cracked in space. A bacteria invaded the satellite. The bacteria was dangerous and killed almost everyone in the town. The was called the Andromeda Strain. The team of scientists ended up in Wildfire, a lab that was top security and top secret. They discover that two people survived the Andromeda Strain: Jamie Ritter, an infant, and Peter Jackson, an old alcoholic who drinks Sterno and takes acetometophine by the bottle. The scientists search to find the common link.
He is a chilean poet, he was born in 1904 and died in 1973. Neruda was called the greatest poet of the 20th century in any language. He won a lot of prizes one of them was a nobel prize of literature in 1971. Neruda wrote this book celebrating his love. The book is talking about the different periods in his relationship with his wife Matteld .
-Poem 1:
It says: if your eyes were not the color of moon, of a day full of clay and work and fire. this is the first line of the poem. maybe that means that this love is so beautiful but so hard it is like if we say that this love is as the most pretty rose. but the prettiest rose is the most one that have more thorns than any other tipe of flowers. it is maybe saying that love is the biggest hurt but the largest joie. we could know that he loves her so much, his life depend on her life and that this woman is everything for him. as he says: but when i hold you i hold everything that is...
-Poem 2:
The first line says: i crave your mouth, your voice, your hair. silent and starving, i prowl through the streets. It means that he strongly wants her, and he is looking for her everywhere as he misses her so much, it is saying that he is lost without her and that he is nothing if she is not by his side. she means for him a lot and he loves her much.
-Poem 3:
It is saying that the time is so short when they are together. or maybe he wants to say there is something happened and they were focusing on it then he could not enjoy her her, and now he wants to give that time to do what he could not do.
it seems that he really likes her hair. as he says: i only want to be your stylist. also he is telling that he loves her so much, as he says: do not forget me remember that i love you. also, he really needs her with him, as he says: don't let me wander lost without your hair.
-Poem 4:
The first line of this poem says: i do not love you as if you were salt--rose, or topaz...I love you as certain dark things are to be loved, in secret, between the shadow and the soul. it maybe means thatthis love is a secret between him and himself and that it could be something so pretty that we can see but it is not as it is invisible. but however he it is a beautiful feeling inside, as he says: i love you as the plant that never blooms but caries in itself the light of hidden flowers.he is saying that he just love her and he can not control his feeling, as he says: i love you without knowing how or when or frome where. he loves her so much and his heart, his mind and his soul are always with her, he is talking as there is two souls in one body, as he says: so close that your hand on my chest is my hand, so close that your eyes close as i am fall asleep.
-Poem 5:
in the first line it says: leaning in to the afternoons i cast my sad nets towards your oceanic eyes. so, he is trying to get something from something that can not give him what he is looking for. he is putting his nets in a sad ocean where there is nothing to get,.the fire of that love is burning him and no one could take him out even water as he is talking about fire and drowning. he is lost, he is drowning in that ocean which is her eyes or love, he is lost and he wants to be in the sea or the beach, he wants to see the land, he wants to see something that tells him that he is all right and he does not need to be scared anymore, something like the lighthouse. all of these things that he wants to see are just in her eyes, all of these places where he wants to be are in her eyes. but her eyes are so far, he can not see her eyes as they are absent eyes which means that everything is absent. he says: there in the highest blaze my solitude lengthens and flames, its arms turning like drowning man s. i send out red signals acrosse your absent eyes that smell like the sea or the beach by lighthouse. his love for her gives him a courage and strength, he could do anything just to arrive to her, as he says: leaning to the afternoons i fling my nets to the sea that is thrashed by your oceanic eyes. it seems like this love hurts him someway but it still beautiful and he is fighting for it, as he said: the birds of night peck at the fast stars that flash like my soul when i love you. the night gallops on its shadowy mare shedding blue tassels over the land..
I really love these poems, i like how the poet is using the opposite language and relating everything to nature, his poems are unclear, i feel like he has some of sheakspear language as he uses a lot of medaforms and we can not understand what he wants to say exactly. if i would have an opportunity to change something in these poems i would never change anything, when i was reading them i felt that he feels what he wrote or he wrote what he felt. and if the write what he feels he makes the reader live with him what he is saying.
i am so glad because i knew this poet and i rad his poems i hope if i could read the haul book. if some one is looking for something to read i would definitively say that this book is one of the best books.
i loved it, i loved it, i loved it.
Tracy Lynn crafts another gripping, yet comedic, novel for the eyes of young adults. This book, titled Rx helps the modern teenager understand the ongoing strife between their daily ‘Job’ of being a teenager and the struggles that come with it: self-esteem issues, self-recognition, relationships, romanticism, academic achievement, and highlights drug abuse.
Lynn shows that not only middle and lower class children experience the temptation of finding a way to ‘help’ themselves with whatever they need, through the assistance of drugs and drug abuse. She gives a different perspective; it is one that some are aware exists, but is unbeknownst to the masses. She brings it to light in this thought-provoking novel.
In Lynn’s afterword, she tells her readers that her reasons for writing a book such as Rx are “purely personal”. She was friends with two people whose lives were adversely affected by the wear and tear of illegally obtained prescription drug addiction and abuse. She warns readers that the phrase “just say no” does not get easier to follow with age. A touching finish to a book such as this, I find that Tracy Lynn really implemented her personal life in this novel, which is always reassuring to recognize when it comes to a novel like this.