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Refran

Posted by Cheyenne Pagan in SP3-004 on
​Perdo de menos mi casa
la energía, la energía,
Nueva York
Un día volveré
Perdo de menos mi casa
el ruido, el ruido
música para mis oídos

  • What is your refrán supposed to communicate? 
    It's supposed to communicate what I love about the place I was born. Even though I live in Philly I consider New York my home. 

  • What are you especially happy about with your first draft?
    That it has good content and that it does resemble all those things in seven short lines. 

  • What would you like to improve about your refrán first draft?
    I would like to make it sound more musical and take a look at the rhyming words in spanish and try to incorporate that in to the entire song without losing the meaning that I want it to have. 

  • What was difficult about writing your refrán? 
    I don't think anything was particularly difficult about writing it but it's only my first draft and revising it is going to be the hardest part. 
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Catherine Nardone - my song.

Posted by Catherine Nardone in SP3-004 on
  • Share the first version of your refrán.

La ciudad del amor fraternal,

Una lugar único y orignal.

                          Grande esperanzas pero suenos rotos,
                          Todos carreteras ignotos.
                          Yo llamo a este casa.
    • What is your refrán supposed to communicate?
  • Our refrán is supposed to communicate that we live in the city of brotherly love, a place that's unique and original. A place where people have high hopes, but troubled dreams, where all roads are unknown. But, most of all that this is the place that we call home.
    • What are you especially happy about with your first draft?
  • Yes, we were happy about the first draft because of how we worded I think. It's deep, yet fun.
    • What would you like to improve about your refrán first draft?
  • I think that we would like to make it a little bit longer.
    • What was difficult about writing your refrán? 
  • The most difficult part was rhyming. We had a hard time doing that with only a limited amount of words that actually made sense with what we were trying to say and that rhymed well.
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Refran

Posted by Yasmeen Brownlee in SP3-004 on

filadelphia es muy importante en mi vida

mejor amigos y muy actividades


What is your refrán supposed to communicate?

My Refran is supposed to communicate my feeling about philadelphia as my home as a whole.
What are you especially happy about with your first draft?
I worked on it so i know what i want to say, even though it's not complete
What would you like to improve about your refrán first draft?
More wording, As well as a stronger grasp of the spanish vocab and the question.
What was difficult about writing your refrán?
Before i wrote it down i wasn't sure how i was going to go about this project. Now that I wrote something it will be easier for me to revise.
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Mi Refran

Posted by Tyler Morales in SP3-004 on
Refrán:

​Mi nombre es Aiert,
Vengo yo Nueva Jersey,
No me gusta Nueva Jersey,
Mi casa es aburrido.
    • What is your refrán supposed to communicate? 
      I come from New Jersey and it was very boring there.
    • What are you especially happy about with your first draft?
      I tried explaining that my house in New Jersey was boring
    • What would you like to improve about your refrán first draft?
      Make it rhyme, I couldn't think of words and find some that rhymed
    • What was difficult about writing your refrán? 
      Thinking of what to put in my refrán.
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De donde vengo yo?

Posted by Katherine Hatzidais in SP3-004 on
​refrán: 
yo soy de un lugar
donde las cosas más simples son buenos
donde el amor es profundo
donde las sonrisas son amplias


  • What is your refrán supposed to communicate? 
    My refrán is suppose to communicate that even though things can be tough, theres still a few things that remain the same. 

  • What are you especially happy about with your first draft?
    I am happy about the words because I think they are strong words. 

  • What would you like to improve about your refrán first draft?
    I would like to see if I could write it in a different way or say something even more meaningful. 

  • What was difficult about writing your refrán?  
    I think it was difficult to write something meaningful that could possibly have rhythm. 
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Spanish-Trosario-Refan

Posted by Taina Rosario in SP3-004 on
My refrain talks about how I am me. I feel that it comes from my heart, but I would want it to be slightly longer. It was difficult having things rhyme.

No soy de que vivo
soy yo
es parte de me
pero no y si
soy yo
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Alysha R. Ortiz refran

Posted by Alysha Ortiz in SP3-004 on


-what is your refran supposed to communicate?

a donde yo vivo y que yo gusta


-what are you espically happy about with your first draft?

yo lo hice


-what would you like to improve about your refran first draft?

tratar de limpiar lo que puede ser en una canción


- what was diffcult about writing your refran?

tratando de hacer una canción

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Refran- Johan sebastian rosaro

Posted by Malik Tlili in SP3-004 on
​refrán : me llamo es rosaro:
            y el nombre de me pero es dinero


my refrán is short and it communicates with the listeners because it is simple and those are the only two things needed to know about myself "Roasaro" i am happy with the attractiveness of my refrán. it pulls listeners in and makes the song interesting. i would like to check the spelling and maybe make my refrán longer. the thing that was difficult about writing my refrán is thinking of the correct way to say what i want. 
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Bethany song refran

Posted by Bethany Carter in SP3-004 on
Uno lado un mi familia es grande.
Uno lado un mi familia es pequeña.
Tenemos vos alto pero sabemos oír otros.
Casi todo el mundo encuentran lo confuso.
Yo crecí con ellos.

The refrán is supposed to communicate that my family is loud and confusing but for me its normal.
I like that I was able to not feel as limited by the words I could choose from.
I would like to improve the flow of it so it would be easier to sing.
The difficult part was finding the right translation in the dictionary. 
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21/9: Ahorita

Posted by Ronald Jackson in SP3-004 on
Soy de Filadelfia
La zoo de Filadelfia
Es mi zoo favorito
¡Sí, es mi vida!

Ir al zoo todas las dias
Es qué yo gusta
Es mi casa cierto
¡Sí, tú y yo!

My refrain shows of my love for the Philadelphia Zoo.

I am happiest with the choice of words that I used in my first draft.

I would like to improve the words that I used at the end of each line. My hope is for it to eventually rhyme.

The most difficult part was trying to find words that rhyme.
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