Un día volveré
Perdo de menos mi casa
el ruido, el ruido
música para mis oídos
- What is your refrán supposed to communicate?
It's supposed to communicate what I love about the place I was born. Even though I live in Philly I consider New York my home.
- What are you especially happy about with your first draft?
That it has good content and that it does resemble all those things in seven short lines.
- What would you like to improve about your refrán first draft?
I would like to make it sound more musical and take a look at the rhyming words in spanish and try to incorporate that in to the entire song without losing the meaning that I want it to have.
- What was difficult about writing your refrán?
I don't think anything was particularly difficult about writing it but it's only my first draft and revising it is going to be the hardest part.