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Basilio (N. Manton): EL Refrn

Posted by Nicholas Manton in SP3-004 on
​Yo vivo en el silencio
Pero hablan
La cuidad hablan
Yo vengo de felicidad y sonrisas.
Muchos extraños personas creas mi vida
¡Mi vida es maravillosa!
Vivo en el ciudad del amor fraternal.
Vivo en el ciudad de la calma, los jovenes, los viejos, el ciudad
De Filadefia.

1. My refrain is supposed to show the many different things in which we live in.

2. I am happy with how diverse our refrains were, but they still had a little flow to them.

3. I would like to make it flow together better.

4. It was difficult to write where I'm from without being boring.
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Anita Patterson - Refran

Posted by Allison Patterson in SP3-004 on
Refran: Vengo de Venezuela y yo vengo de Pensilvana ahora estamos junta cantando de Roxborough en donde vivimos. De día y de noche celebramos y cantamos se vaya. Ya..ya lo sabes todo en Roxborough todos son locos. Pero ahí tiempos que todos se cambian..silenció..oscuro..las calles vacías. Pero esto es Roxborough en donde vivimos.

  • Share the first version of your refrán.
    • What is your refrán supposed to communicate?
  • The refran shows what we do in Roxobrough.
    • What are you especially happy about with your first draft?
  • I like the flow.
    • What would you like to improve about your refrán first draft?
  • I would like to shorten it.
    • What was difficult about writing your refrán?
  • Keeping in tempo.

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Refrn

Posted by Kimberly Parker in SP3-004 on
​Amor y familia es todos lo que nietecito
Nietecito yo nosotros muy malo
Yo amor nosotros
Yo lo hacer simepre

  • What is your refrán supposed to communicate? 
    The refrán is supposed to say ho much I love my family and how much I need them. 
  • What are you especially happy about with your first draft?
    I'm happy that it makes sense and fits together. 
  • What would you like to improve about your refrán first draft?
    I would like to check to see if every word is in the correct spot and spelled right. 
  • What was difficult about writing your refrán? 
    Forming sentences is really really hard for me. 
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Refran

Posted by Terrance Oliveri-Wiliams in SP3-004 on
Estamos de dos uno cinco

Y mucho dinero

que vivimos, la respiración, y comer philly

porque esta es nuestra ciudad


Our chorus should communicate where we are from and what our city means to us. I am really happy that we actually came up with the chorus', so just in case we don't feel one of them, we can always us the other one, as long as it is approved by Srta. G. I would like to improve on the flow and rhythm to our chorus, the syllables make it hard to stay constant and keep the same tempo. The hardest part about writing the chorus was trying to make it rhyme, we didnt quite get there, but we are working on it. 
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