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Luna's Math Help

Posted by Sofia Frank-Fischer on Thursday, May 31, 2012 at 9:33 am

When students search for math help on google, they can only search by the topic they want help with. Content varies widely, and students have to waste time trying to find types of content that work for the way they learn best. For my capstone, I wanted to design a website that would make this process easier. At first, I considered making content myself, or crowd-sourcing the creation of new content – all organized by learning style as well as by topic. I realized, however, that I could be far more effective by organizing the math help content that already exists online. I designed the site and learned how to write code so that I could build the site. I began the process of indexing content from a variety of math help websites, such as Khan Academy and Purplemath. Although I do not have a polished and fully functional website to turn in for my capstone, I will continue to work on the site over the summer and possibly the next few years. I believe that my capstone could turn into a useful and popular site for any and all math students.



Take a look at the site here!
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Image Upload for Capstone

Posted by Sofia Frank-Fischer in Senior Assistant Teaching - Latimer on Wednesday, May 30, 2012 at 5:49 pm
Here I am, thinking to myself, "how ever will I get this image online in an easy, free, and simple way?" AND THEN LIGHTNING STRUCK. And by lightning, I mean an idea. I'll just upload it here!

Nothing to see, people-who-want-to-look-at-completed-work. Move right along, and perhaps take a look here.
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Exit Poll Data Analysis

Posted by Sofia Frank-Fischer in American Government - Laufenberg on Thursday, January 26, 2012 at 9:55 am

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This chart shows the ages of voters. There is a clear trend: as people get older, they become more likely to vote for Gingrich or Romney, and less likely to vote for Santorum or Paul. My theory is that this is caused by the kind of advertising the candidates use and who their policies appeal to. I find the divide interesting: Paul and Santorum, who are kind of on the fringes of the campaign, appeal to young people; Gingrich and Romney, who seem to be the two main contestants, appeal to older people.




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This chart shows the incomes of the voters. Each candidate has a really interesting trend. Ron Paul's strongest support is in lower income households, and becomes less and less popular with groups of greater incomes. Gingrich has relatively high support across all levels, but his strongest point is definitely in the middle – he has less support among the richest and poorest groups. Mitt Romney is popular in exactly the opposite way as Gingrich: among the richest and poorest, he is popular, but less so among middle classes. Santorum is, like Gingrich, most popular in the middle – but less so among the poorest and wealthiest voters.


Chart 3:

This chart is the results of the polling question, "What quality matters most to you in a candidate?" I found a few things most interesting. First, each candidate has a clear weakness: clearly, Romney does not appeal to anyone who wants a "true conservative", and Gingrich is not considered to have strong moral character. Santorum is not popular among those who want an experienced candidate, and Paul is not favored for beating Obama. Another great analysis of this chart is the fact that there seems to be an inverse relationship between having strong moral character and being able to defeat Barack Obama. Clearly, people do truly believe that those who are morally true can succeed in politics. And, apparently, for good reason: there is also an inverse relationship between those who are favored for experience and those who have strong moral character!



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Quarter 2 Benchmark: 19th Amendment

Posted by Sofia Frank-Fischer in American Government - Laufenberg on Thursday, January 19, 2012 at 8:39 am
This video was created following the guidelines for C-SPAN's StudentCam project. 

I worked with Thea Farah and Rita Willard.

If the embed isn't working, check here for a link!


At first, my group wanted to look into the ability of the president to veto bills. However, we couldn't find vetoed bills that really affect us. Instead, since our group was all female, we figured that the amendment that most directly affected us was the 19th. Once we picked a topic, our lives got a bit easier! We did have a lot of trouble choosing a method of storytelling. Although I do really like the freedom we had to pick our method, so long as it fit in the video, we ended up brainstorming for far too long and didn't have as much time to produce.

Although I appreciated that the project was formatted after the C-SPAN documentary challenge, I think that a slightly altered assignment could have been better for SLA. Maybe we could have chosen whether to create documentary videos or some other form of presentation – videos tend to be just as much about editing as about actual information. We could have had more restrictions on how much history we had to put in. My group did a lot of work on finding the history of the 19th amendment, but didn't include much of it in our project because it didn't fit with C-SPAN's requirements.

As we prepared to create our video, we found plenty of drama in the fight for women's suffrage: a constitutional amendment was brought to congress for 40 years in a row before it was passed, women wrote a "Declaration of Sentiments" that is a pointed reference to the Declaration of Independence, and more. The one point that I found most interesting was the story of the ratification of the amendment. In the end, it all came down to the vote of a single senator within Tennessee. He was in his 20s, and ended up voting for women's suffrage partly because his mother wrote him a note and told him to do so.

In the end, I liked our final project. However, I don't think it thoroughly reflected all that we learned. Instead of telling the story of the amendment, we had to think of ways to explain why the right to vote matters to us. I think that we ended up successful because our video definitely explored the reasons that the 19th amendment matters, and even tied in those reasons to the history of the amendment and an international perspective.

My group specifically ran into a lot of trouble with the scheduling and technicalities of collaboration. We had to get the video from computer to computer, and weren't able to find time to all work together at the same time. Even when we did all work together, we ended up unable to work efficiently. I did enjoy working with the group, though, because we all brought different ideas to the table. If I had to do this project over, I think I'd want to start getting video earlier. That way, we would have been able to add more pictures and other edited pieces, and I think our project would have been richer. However, I did like our overall project, and am proud of my work.

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Safe Chemicals Act – Blog Post 4

Posted by Sofia Frank-Fischer in American Government - Laufenberg on Saturday, December 17, 2011 at 1:27 pm

In order to pursue my issue, I need to convince my senators to back the Safe Chemicals Act of 2011. The main resource I've been using is the Safer Chemicals, Healthy Families website, which is a preexisting group lobbying for the bill. It describes itself as "an nationwide effort to pass smart federal policies that protect us from toxic chemicals." The website has various ways to get involved in the campaign. My first step as a citizen lobbyist was to join the site. Now, I receive their update emails. I also have participated in various ways they are advocating for the Safe Chemicals Act of 2011:

  • They ask people to send an email to their state legislators about the act. Their website has an interface to make the sending of these emails easy. However, the email is not personalized. Instead, it relies on the celebrity status of Jessica Alba, who has become the face of the campaign. I still feel that this effort is a good idea if it attracts high enough numbers. In addition to participating, I am going to ask others to also fill out the form, using Facebook.

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  • In a similar, and more personal, effort, Safer Chemicals, Healthy Families asked its members to upload a holiday family photo, along with a brief message to senators about why toxic chemical control is important to us. I joined this effort as well, uploading a photo of myself with my little brother and the message "I want my little brother to be safe from harmful chemicals! Please cosponsor the Safe Chemicals Act of 2011. Happy holidays." Although this action is much more personal than the letter, a single person's actions do not mean much. I plan to ask friends to also send in photos.

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I also plan to call my senators about the act, and leave a message asking them to cosponsor the legislation. I will ask my friends to do the same, and have written a sample script to make the process easier. I wrote one of these scripts for a call to Bob Casey, and one for a call to Pat Toomey. I tried to use my previous research into the senators' interests and values to inform the writing of my script.

Generally, I am focusing on getting many people to participate in the emails, holiday cards, and phone calls. Because I cannot vote yet, I doubt that even a strong message coming solely from me would have much impact. However, a large number of people always have more influence than just one.

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How to get a Green Card: Flowchart

Posted by Sofia Frank-Fischer in American Government - Laufenberg on Wednesday, December 7, 2011 at 4:59 pm
Click here for a published version with working links!

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Along with Jeff Kessler, I chose the bureaucratic task of filing for a Green Card. There are various ways to get a Green Card – through family, through employment, as a refugee, and more. Each way has its own particular paperwork. Everything is made even more confusing when the person filing is currently outside the United States. Jeff and I filled out the paperwork required for getting a Green Card through a marriage, which was not particularly difficult. However, many of the other types of Green Card paperwork are not nearly as straightforward.

Jeff and I first made the flow chart, dividing up the various routes to a Green Card between the two of us. I worked on getting a Green Card through family members, which has, in itself, various sub-options. The paperwork had two parts, and so we split that up. I filled out the shorter post, and spent extra time making our flow chart colorful and well-formatted.

The system for getting a Green Card is convoluted at best. I think that this is because, as various situations arise, complexity is added from necessity – but no one ever takes the time to weed out the now-outdated complexities. Also, I think that there is a motivation to keep people from being able to easily gain access to the country. If I could, I would make the three main categories (family, employment, refugee) still separate, but within each have just a clearly defined process, instead of many sub-processes.

I enjoyed this process. I thought it was a valuable experience: waiting on line, figuring out paperwork, following link trails online to find steps are all things that I will certainly have to do as I interact with the government throughout my life. I also liked making the flow chart, because it was a cool, math-related challenge.

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SCOTUS Case Blog: Setser vs. US

Posted by Sofia Frank-Fischer in American Government - Laufenberg on Wednesday, December 7, 2011 at 3:35 pm
Constitutional Question

This case is about the interaction between government at the State level and at the Federal level. For this reason, it has to do with Article 4 and Amendment 10. Because it has to do with fairness of sentencing, it also is related to Amendment 7. Finally, the question is related to power in the judicial branch (the court system) and power in the executive branch (the prison system), and so it is a question of checks and balances.

The specific question is: If someone is charged with a state crime and a federal crime, and the state court has not yet determined a sentence, can the federal court order the federal sentence to be served consecutively to the not-yet-imposed state sentence?



Facts of the Case

In 2006, Monroe Setser, of Texas, was sentenced to five years of probation for possession of methamphetamine. A year later, he pleaded guilty to a federal charge of possession of 50 or more grams of methamphetamine, with intent to distribute. The crime was also an offense in the state of Texas, and so the federal court knew that Setser's possession charge could lead to a state sentence – not to mention to a revocation of his probation. Because of this, the federal court wanted to decide how all of those hypothetical sentences would interact. They decided that Setser's federal sentence would be served after any sentence that the state gave for the earlier possession crime, but at the same time as any sentence imposed for the 2007 possession-and-intent-to-sell crime.

The state court then sentenced Setser. For the 2006 crime, they revoked his parole and gave him five years in prison, and for the 2007 crime they gave him 10 years in prison. They ordered those two sentences to be served at the same time.

In 2010, he was paroled from the state crime and transferred to the federal prison system. The federal sentence was not shortened at all from time spent serving the state sentences.

Setser said that the court should not have the right to decide how his sentences were to be served, and so he appealed the federal sentence. The United States actually agrees with Setser, so the court appointed a man named Evan Young to argue the case against him.


Summary of the Arguments before the SCOTUS

Setser argued with that the prison system should have the right to decide how his sentences are to be served, and not the federal court. His argument is based on 18 U.S.C. §3584(a), a law which states that:

"If multiple terms of imprisonment are imposed on a defendant at the same time, or if a term of imprisonment is imposed on a defendant who is already subject to an undischarged term of imprisonment, the terms may run concurrently or consecutively… Multiple terms of imprisonment imposed at the same time run concurrently unless the court orders or the statute mandates that the terms are to run consecutively. Multiple terms of imprisonment imposed at different times run consecutively unless the court orders that the terms are to run concurrently."

His main argument is that, because his own circumstance does not fall under the specific cases outlined in the law, the judge of the federal court should not be able to decide how his sentences were to be served. Instead, he argues, the federal prison system should decide that matter at the end of his state term. He also states that, before that particular section was enacted, the Bureau of Prisons had the power to make sentences run at the same time – and so, since the statute does not apply to his particular case, the Bureau of Prisons should still have that right.

The counterargument is that the statute is a way of giving more power to courts, not specifying when they have power. In both of the situations outlined by the statute, the judge is allowed to decide whether to overwrite the default – so, even though Setser's particular case is not included in those situations, the judge should still be able to say how the sentences should be served.


Predictions on the outcome

The United States actually agrees with Setser. This makes me believe that the Supreme Court is likely to yield that the federal court did, indeed, make a mistake in specifying how Setser should serve his various sentences, even before the state sentences were decided.


SOURCE:

Michael Dimino, Argument preview: Court to consider run-on sentences, SCOTUSblog (Nov. 23, 2011, 3:00 PM), http://www.scotusblog.com/2011/11/argument-preview-court-to-consider-run-on-sentences/

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Lobbying Blog 3: Safe Chemicals Act

Posted by Sofia Frank-Fischer in American Government - Laufenberg on Saturday, November 19, 2011 at 2:00 pm
This is a good year for my lobbying topic. In fact, I am hopeful that the Safe Chemicals Act will be passed this year. There are a few reasons for this optimism. Firstly, I found my topic through an article in Scientific American, which means that the bill has been in the news. The article made some suggestions for the improvement of the bill, but was definitively supportive. Secondly, my bill has strong allies in the Senate, where it currently awaits a vote. Senator Frank Lautenberg of New Jersey first introduced legislation related to toxic chemical control in 2005, and has been fighting for the idea continually. 

On the 17th of November, there was a hearing about the bill. I was able to find the video of the hearing online. Lautenberg opened with remarks about the bill's history. He explained that he'd talked to Republicans about making the bill bipartisan, and talked to Chemical Industry companies about their suggestions, too. He also said that most of the Democrats on the Committee for Environment and Public Works have become cosponsors of the legislation. There are 12 cosponsors in total. In fact, OpenCongress does not list any organizations currently opposing the bill! Despite all this, major chemical companies are not in full support of the bill. In the November 17th hearing, American Chemistry Council President and CEO Cal Dooley talked about his problems with the Safe Chemicals Act. He said that the bill "remains very similar to the bill which was introduced in 2010, which we consider unworkable." Most of his problems with the bill hinged on the tough standards for data and regulation, many of which would be difficult for the EPA and chemical industries to meet. However, he seemed to be willing to work with Lautenberg and other senators to make the bill more workable.

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Senator Lautenberg (above) and the President and CEO of the American
Chemical Council (below) speaking at a hearing on November 17th.
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I know a lot about the history of the Toxic Substances Control Act, which the Safe Chemicals Act would override, and know that the chemical industry played a large part in writing that bill. I am worried that the Safe Chemicals Act could go the same way as it's predecessor, and end up as a basically useless measure. For this reason, I need to advocate for the bill in its current, strong form.

Although there are twelve senators cosponsoring the legislation, none of those senators are from Pennsylvania. I can write to Bob Casey and ask him to cosponsor the bill, or at least to pledge his support. I could also write to Pat Toomey, but I am doubtful that he will support the legislation. I recently saw an advertisement of his that was paid for by the petroleum industry. I was not able to find the ad online, but did find an article about the American Petroleum Institute's advertisements for Toomey and various other candidates. This makes me think that Pat Toomey cares more about big companies and industries than environmental or citizen health. I can still write to him, and explain my position.

When I first started to research the Safe Chemicals Act, I found the website Safer Chemicals, Healthy Families. This site is an effort to pass legislation like the Safe Chemicals Act, and they have a sign-up for interested citizens. I already gave them my email, so I will be receiving updates on the bill's progress and opportunities to help. I also can write a letter to my Senators through their website. The website even has their own celebrity: Jessica Alba is working to push the Safe Chemicals Act through Congress!

One of the features on their website allows visitors to send a message to senators Casey and Toomey. I have not decided whether to send the senators a message through the website, or whether to send them one on my own. Either way, I will certainly be adding my voice to the many who call for the Safe Chemicals Act to be passed. 

I was not able to find any upcoming dates for meetings, committee hearings, deadlines, or anything like that. However, during the November 17th hearing, Senator Lautenberg said that he would be calling for a vote in the Senate soon. Because of this, I need to act now! At the moment, the only person I can influence in particular is Senator Bob Casey, by asking him to cosponsor the bill. I think that, with enough pressure from Pennsylvanians, Casey would support the bill. Pat Toomey, on the other hand, will probably not. I can still send him a message, to show my beliefs.

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Story of a Bill: TSCA

Posted by Sofia Frank-Fischer in American Government - Laufenberg on Friday, November 4, 2011 at 1:08 pm
This is the story of the Toxic Substances Control Act of 1976, as told by the bill's own diary!

I chose to research the Toxic Substances Control Act of 1976 (TSCA) because it is so closely related to my lobbying project, which focuses on legislation that, if passed, would replace TSCA. I expected that a deep understanding of the history of TSCA would help me argue for the Clean Chemicals Act of 2011.
TSCA started as an idea by the President's Council on Environmental Quality, and six years later it finally became a law. My research illuminated the many ways in which a bill can fail – because TSCA encountered or almost encountered plenty of failures. It was edited from its original version before it even went to Congress, died in conference committee several times, and was almost subject to a pocket veto. I imagined that TSCA's progression from idea to law would be difficult because of the chemical industries, but was impressed at the scope of the difficulties. Despite all these obstacles, the environmental groups and the concerns of citizens still got the bill through Congress eventually.
The most difficult part of this project for me was how much general information I found. I didn't know what to do with all of it, or how to find more specific facts about moments in the process. I was able to fix this problem by coming up with a method of presentation that restricted what I the information I needed. I chose the format of diary partly because of the specific information it would require (like particular dates and that kind of thing). I also chose the format because it allowed me to highlight the particular failures and accomplishments of TSCA by making up emotions for the bill itself. I had a lot of fun personifying TSCA.
If I had to do this project again, I think I would add in information about other bills, contemporaries of TSCA. There were many bills related to the Toxic Substances Control Act that were in Congress at the same time, and I'd love to explore what TSCA would have thought of those bills and their successes and failures.
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Lobbying Blog Post 2: Clean Chemicals Act

Posted by Sofia Frank-Fischer in American Government - Laufenberg on Friday, October 21, 2011 at 12:03 pm
I am lobbying for the Clean Chemicals Act of 2011. Currently, the bill is in the Senate, in committee. With a bit of research, I found out that my bill is currently in the Senate Committee on Environment and Public Works. None of the representatives from my state are in this committee. The chair is Barbara Boxer, a democrat from California. I looked at her voting record, and it was clear she would be for the bill. Right now, the bill is in the subcommittee on Superfund, Toxics, and Environmental Health. Luckily for my bill, the chair of that subcommittee is Frank R. Lautenberg, the New Jersey representative who first introduced the bill. The minority "ranking members" of committee and subcommittee are republicans from the midwest. Generally, their voting histories make me think that they will be against a powerful bill to control chemical production because it could affect industry. They have no reason to listen to me, because I am not a constituent – nor do I have any ties to their states. Because they are the minority, however, I still hope that my bill can make it to Senate.


My representatives in Senate are Bob Casey and Pat Toomey.

Bob Casey, on his website, states that "as a Senator from Pennsylvania, I am committed to protecting the environment, preserving our natural treasures, and safeguarding the health of our families," and states that energy and the environment are among his priorities. He says that he is strongly against fracking, and has cosponsored one bill that would "close big oil tax loopholes". However, based on the list of legislation he has sponsored and cosponsored, his priorities seem to lie much more with veterans and education. He has four daughters, all of whom are around my age, and he plays basketball – so I would definitely be able to start a conversation with him.

Pat Toomey, on the other hand, will certainly not want the bill to be passed. One of his slogans is "More Jobs, Less Government" (see image below). Because of this, he will certainly not want more restrictions on companies that could be producing more and hiring more. He even introduced the Employment Protection Act of 2011, which would make the EPA "consider the impact on employment levels and economic activity" before any regulatory action. The Clean Chemicals Act is certainly in conflict with this bill. I looked for interests he and I might share, and found nothing. I am uncertain how I will be able to argue for this bill against someone who so clearly is opposed to anything of the kind.

If the bill gets through Senate, it will go to the House of Representatives. There, my representative if Chaka Fattah (see district map below). Looking through his legislative record, it is clear that his priority lies with education – from early childhood care to college funding. Howeve, he also sponsored the Clean Energy Act of 2010, which would have supported research into nuclear energy and other forms of renewable power. Based on this, I think he is highly likely to support the Clean Chemicals Act of 2011. Because of his interest in education, especially public education, I would definitely try to start a conversation by talking to him about my school.

For the post part, my representatives and the people on the bill's committee look like they'll support it. However, the opponents of the bill look quite immovable: Toomey, with whom I have very little in common, and the various Senators who are strongly opposed to the bill and do not have any reason to listen to some girl from Pennsylvania.

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(from Toomey's campaign website)


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(from www.house.gov, representative search by zip code.)
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Lobbying: Safe Chemicals Act (blog post 1)

Posted by Sofia Frank-Fischer in American Government - Laufenberg on Friday, October 7, 2011 at 8:47 pm
When I first started to brainstorm topics to lobby, I wanted to focus on environmental protection. Ever since my trip to the Dominican Republic, I have been interested in this issue. I started to look at statistics about Philadelphia's environmental protection policies, as compared to those of other cities. To my surprise, I found that Philadelphia is actually doing a good job, and is also steadily improving. Mayor Nutter even has a website dedicated to his Greenworks Philadelphia plan. At first, I thought I would move up to state level, and focus on Pennsylvania's plentiful environmental policy issues. I considered talking about fracking, but many other students in my class were already focused on that issue.

In the end, my topic found me: I was reading Scientific American, and spotted a brief article about the Safe Chemicals Act of 2011 (PDF here), a bill that would act to control the dangerous chemicals that so often show up in everyday items. The act, introduced by Senator Frank R. Lautenberg, would give the Environmental Protection Agency more freedom – and responsibility – to test and regulate chemicals. Currently, under the Toxic Substances Control Act of 1976, the EPA has little power over industry's use of chemicals.

As I researched the Safe Chemicals Act, I found a group, Safer Chemicals, Healthy Families, which strongly supports the bill. The describe themselves as "a nationwide effort to pass smart federal policies that protect us from toxic chemicals". They are pushing hard for reform on the Toxic Substance Control Act, and think that the proposed Safe Chemicals Act would be a major improvement. They want to "hold industry responsible for the safety of their chemicals and products".

The American Chemistry Council is perhaps less enthusiastic, but not against the bill. According to a statement by President and CEO Cal Dooley, the ACC is "strongly aligned on the need to modernize the 35-year-old Toxic Substances Control Act." However, they believe that Lautenberg's proposal "contained provisions that would not have produced the benefits intended by its authors" and "could put American innovation and jobs at risk."

I believe that the Safe Chemicals Act would be a step forward. According to the article in Scientific American, "even extremely low levels of some environmental contaminants may have significant damaging effects on our bodies." This is a serious risk, and I believe that the health and safety of all citizens should be a high priority for the government.

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What If Project: DDT

Posted by Sofia Frank-Fischer in American History - Laufenberg on Tuesday, June 7, 2011 at 3:03 pm
For our fourth quarter benchmark for English and History, we each chose a decision – mundane, famous, or anything in between – from all of American history. We researched that decision, finding at least three primary source documents from just before the decision point. We then figured out a plausible way to change that decision. We followed the effects of the change through history, making up three events and describing an alternate 2011. For each of our three events, we fabricated two primary source documents. We chose a method for telling the whole story, and put it all together into a final product. I looked at the decision to ban DDT, and made a fake class project from the alternate 2011.

Although I originally had a lot of trouble finding my decision point, I ended up enjoying this project a lot. I researched the government decision to ban the chemical pesticide DDT – and other pesticides. I was fascinated to find that one book, Rachel Carson's Silent Spring, started a huge movement against pesticides. Carson succeeded in publishing a book that truly spoke to the public. The Chemical Industries, of course, fought back hard against Carson's message. They were not as adept at squashing opposition then (in the 60s) as they are now. In my alternate history, the Chemical Industries decided to bribe a few key figures, and managed to keep Carson's book from getting any publicity. I loved researching the whole thing – it really seemed like one person, Rachel Carson, had made a huge difference in the course of the world. She was a biologist and writer, and that fortunate combination allowed her to write a convincing, beautiful, and readable book about the effects of the toxic pesticides on the environment and on human health. With that single action, she was able to, indirectly, pass a law through Congress.

My favorite part of the actual creating of the project was definitely fabricating primary source documents. I felt so cool, like some kind of all-powerful, primary-source-creating being. I like formatting everything, too. I found specific examples of various types of primary source documents and then made my own versions look as accurate as possible. I definitely also had fun with my invention of a history project, although I think that I could probably improve the actual writing on the pages. I didn't spend as much time on creating the website as I did on creating my primary source documents. I also wish I'd been able to make my cartoon more readable, but I think that it's clear enough to make its point. One of the things I'm most proud of in this project is how well I managed my time. Although I was stressed out and a bit behind at the beginning of the project because of my trouble choosing a topic, I worked diligently during the first week of the assignment and was able to relax during the second week.

Take a look at my project!

-- Luna Sofia Frank-Fischer
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Musical Instrument Blog #2

Posted by Sofia Frank-Fischer in Physics - Echols on Thursday, May 26, 2011 at 4:00 pm
My instrument, a simplified "Hammered Dulcimer":
The instrument is played by hitting strings with a small metal mallet. When the mallet hits the string, it causes the string to vibrate. This vibration sets off a wave in the air molecules - a sound wave. The different strings of the instrument produce different waves, and therefore different pitches. For example, a more tightly pulled string will produce a higher frequency wave, which results in a higher pitch. Important physical characteristics of the instrument include something to tune the strings with, so that I can make sure they produce the right wave frequency. Another important characteristic is the mallet, because that is what causes the strings to vibrate. I think that I need to have some kind of base that will make the sound more audible, but I'm not sure how. Maybe something like a guitar – a hollow wooden construction. I'm not sure. I'm not sure what kind of material is best to use for the strings, but I think I'll use a spool of "string wire". I'll need wood for the base of the instrument and also a stick of wood for the handle of the mallet. I'll need some metal for the head of the mallet. I kind of want to try to use bridges as well, but I'm not sure how those work. I need to do a bit more research into that topic.
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Musical Instrument Blog #1

Posted by Sofia Frank-Fischer in Physics - Echols on Friday, May 20, 2011 at 8:11 pm
I want to create a simplified version of a "hammered dulcimer", which is a kind of string instrument. Here is a video of someone playing a hammered dulcimer, and here is an instructional video on how to play.

The instrument is played by hitting strings with a kind of mallet/stick. Different strings produce different notes. I'd want to make a similar version of this instrument, so I might not include the piece that divides the string into two. I don't know. When the string is struck, it vibrates, creating sound waves. I could control various aspects of the wave by controlling the length of the string and how tight it is. I'd have maybe seven or eight strings, each playing different notes. I could also put in a bridge at some point to control the length of the waves. If there is a bridge one-third of the way down the string, that piece of the string would be held in place - and that would control the length of the wave. One thing I wonder is what kind of mallet is used. I also wonder how to make a good base for the instrument that will help to make the sound audible.
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Reflexion sobre "Un Arbol Crece en Brooklyn"

Posted by Sofia Frank-Fischer in Spanish Literature - Gierke on Saturday, May 14, 2011 at 11:24 am
Yo leí "Un Árbol Crece en Brooklyn". Estoy en el primer capítulo ahora. El libro se trata de una niña pobre en Nueva York. Ella es la hija de inmigrantes de Este Europa. El en primer capítulo, ella y su hermano (que es un año menor) se acumulan basura en las calles - papel y varios tipos de metal. El sábado, van col la chatarra para venderla a un hombre. Reciben 16 centavos a cambio. Son muy pobres, y el libro toma lugar cuando un centavo era como 25 centavos. Entonces, ellos son muy feliz tener el dinero. En una escena feliz, la niña toma mucho tiempo para decidir en que va a gastar su dinero. La escena me recuerda que la gente que no tiene nada – como la niña y su hermano – son muy feliz recibir un poco, mientras a la gente que tiene mucho no hace feliz unos centavos. Para cada dólar que tiene, el próximo parece menos importante.
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Exxon-Valdez Oil Spill: Luna's Reflection

Posted by Sofia Frank-Fischer in American History - Laufenberg on Friday, May 6, 2011 at 12:10 pm
What went well?
I felt that all of us, as a group, were able to be flexible and listen to each others' opinions. We also did a lot of good research. I thought that our infographic had a lot of good information on it.

What did not?
Although we had a lot of ideas, we were not able to carry through with all of them. Mostly, this was because of some time management issues. We worked hard on the project every day during class, but did not work on it at home or outside of class.

What would you do differently next time?
I would put more time into the project outside of class. I would also try to incorporate more charts or graphs; we had text but no data representations.

How did you do for the 10 infographic tips:
I think that our group was most successful in being different (because our spiral with photos was a unique idea), being attractive (because our design was elegant in black and white!), and being accurate (because our information was spot-on).
I think we could have done a lot better in being visual (because, although we had photos, most of our info was text), being varies (because we just had text and photos), and being concise (because we had little paragraphs at the bottom).
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Q3 Benchmark: Mujeres en Culturas Hispnicas

Posted by Sofia Frank-Fischer on Monday, April 4, 2011 at 8:57 am
Luna Frank-Fischer
Español 5
Marzo 2011

    Voces: Una Entrevista Cada Semana
Siempre he pensado en los papeles de género en nuestro sociedad. Por eso, para mi sección personal esta semana, yo estoy muy emocionada presentar una entrevista con algunas mujeres de personalidades muy fuertes. Hablé con ellas sobre las papeles de género y las vidas de mujeres en nuestra sociedad. Aquí es la entrevista, pero primero un poco sobre cada mujer.

Alfonsina Storni era una poeta famosa de Argentina. Ella era escritora y también maestra. Cuando vivía, escribió sus opiniones fuertes y femeninas sin miedo. Ella tomó su vida cuando tenía apenas 46 años. Pepa es la protagonista de la película “Mujeres al borde de un Ataque de Nervios”. Es mujer fuerte, pero no sabía eso hasta cuando su situación era tan ridícula que ella necesitaba tomar control para sobrevivir. Rosario Ferré es otra escritora. Ella escribe literatura sobre su vida personal, pero también usa ficción con símbolos para discutir la sociedad, específicamente los papeles de género. Ella es de familia de la clase aristocrática en Puerto Rico. Una otra Rosario, Rosario Tijeras, es protagonista de una telenovela Colombiana (¡que tiene su nombre!). Ella tiene muchos conexiones con la mafia y los carteles de drogas. Por eso, hay mucha violencia en su vida. Durante toda la violencia, a ella importa mucho ser bonita y popular con los hombres.

Pienso que, si hubiera hablado a todos al mismo tiempo, ellas se enojarían mucho, ¡entonces es buena cosa que hablé con cada distintamente!

Yo: ¿Cuáles aspectos de la vida y los papeles de género parecen más injustos?
Alfonsina: Mujeres siempre necesitan ser puras, mientras los hombres pueden ser impuros. Es como ellos pueden comer todo en el banquete de la vida, y nosotras solo podemos quedarnos sentando, aun que tenemos hambre también. También, mujeres son como esclavas a los hombres. Los dos géneros no pueden comprender uno al otro, y los hombres tienen todo el control... entonces nuestras opiniones nunca tienen poder.
Pepa: En nuestra sociedad no importa si hombres son infieles. ¡Es normal! Y mientras las mujeres no pueden hacer nada divertido o interesante. Necesitamos siempre trabajar. Yo siempre estoy trabajando. ¡Trabajo tan duro, en serio! Pero lo que importan es si yo soy bonita, o si sale con algún hombre. A nadie importa que soy fuerte, que trabajo bastante, que tengo cosas interesantes para decir. Es ridículo. ¡Por eso estamos todas locas, nosotras mujeres! Y ¿Por qué siempre las mujeres necesitan quedar embarazadas? Por eso, nosotras siempre necesitamos cuidar a los niños, y los hombres no necesitan hacer nada. Los niños son su culpa también. ¡Más su culpa, en mi opinión!
Rosario Ferré: Es súper injusto. Es que, en la clase alta, a los hombres no importan que haya tantos problemas en el mundo. Y también... los hombres siempre tienen el poder. Y el problema peor es que los hombres y las mujeres se casan porque las mujeres son un símbolo de poder y dinero. No quieren casar por amor – no, quieren casar para que otros pueden pensar, “Él debe de ser tan rico, con su marida hermosa y elegante. Él debe de ser tan poderoso, si controla una mujer como ella.” No es el amor, es nada más que ambición.
Rosario Tijeras: Es que... yo no puedo salir con más que un hombre al mismo tiempo. Muy injusto. Y mi vida, en general, es muy difícil... siempre hay violencia. Todos quieren matarme. Es muy injusto. ¿Qué he hecho a ellos? Solo soy una pobre mujer, ¿sabes?

Yo: ¿Qué piensa usted de los hombres en su vida?
Alfonsina: Muchos quieren tener control. Es algo que todos tienen en común. Todos los hombres quieren que las mujeres se queden en jaulas. No quieren que tengamos ni una parte de su poder. Tampoco escuchan a nuestras palabras.
Pepa: Quieren besar a todas las mujeres, todo el tiempo. A ellos no les importan nuestras emociones.
Rosario Ferré: Pues... mi padre es hombre poderoso – es un político. Y los hombres en general, ellos siempre quieren tener poder. Usan las mujeres y no piensan en sus emociones. Hombres siempre piensan que mujeres no son personas, sino muñecas.
Rosario Tijeras: Me aman. Siempre. Y les gusta usar las pistolas.

Yo: ¿Cómo necesita ser una mujer para tener relaciones con hombres? ¿Y para tener amigas?
Alfonsina: No podemos ser orgullosas porque mujeres son como esclavas en los relaciones. Si estamos orgullosas – como yo – no podemos relacionarnos con hombres fácilmente. Y amigas... no estoy segura. Yo sé que estoy demasiada algo para tener muchas amigas.
Pepa: Ella no debe tener emociones fuertes. Necesitamos siempre controlar nuestros sentimientos porque los hombres no quieren escuchar. Si estamos infelices o estresadas, no podemos decir nada. Para tener amigas mujeres... pienso que una mujer necesita escuchar a las amigas. Yo estaba tan preocupada con mis propios problemas, por ejemplo, que no escuché a una amiga... y ella tenía un problema muy grande. También necesita ser responsable y poder cuidar a sus amigas cuando nos necesitan. ¡Pero depende, por supuesto, en la otra mujer!
Rosario Ferré: Los hombres no les importa como son las mujeres, entonces no importa! Las mujeres pueden ser como quieren – pero no pueden hacer lo que quieren. Y la sociedad mantiene tanto control sobre nosotras que no es posible tener amigas. Somos las muñecas de sus maridos.
Rosario Tijeras: Necesita ser sexy, es muy fácil. Y... ¿amigas? ¿Como mujeres? ¿Por qué?

Yo: Como una mujer, ¿cuáles problemas necesitas eludir?
Alfonsina: Yo soy persona muy fuerte. Soy orgullosa, soy inteligente. Y en nuestro sociedad, no es fácil ser mujer con estas características. No me di cuenta de todos los injustos de la sociedad, y era muy difícil – demasiado difícil – vivir con la verdad.
Pepa: Los hombres. ¡Son problemas! Siempre son tan infieles, como mi estúpido ex-novio. Y otro problema... siempre necesito cuidar a mis amigas. Pero supongo que eso no es porque soy una mujer. No sé porque. Puede ser que tengo amigas muy raras.
Rosario Ferré: ¿Yo? No sé. Es que... hay problemas, necesita ser. Mi vida es súper difícil porque soy una mujer. Pero... no puedo pensar en ningunos ejemplos.
Rosario Tijeras: Después de algunas tiro teos mi pelo parece muy despeinada. También es muy difícil correr en la ropa que siempre llevo. Y los hombres en mi vida siempre quieren acostarse conmigo. No sé que hacer. Es que... cuando quiero hacer cambios de mi situación, nadie me toma en serio. Dicen “¡Oh, Rosario, que atractiva eres!” Y, me entiendes, es muy importante ser bonita. Y yo sí soy. Por supuesto. Pues... estaría bien si me tomarían en serio también, ¿sabes?

Yo: Alfonsina, ¿porque se suicidó?
Alfonsina: Pues... había algunos razones. No voy a mentir, es la verdad que tenía relación mala con un hombre. Pero también tenía cáncer, y también no quería vivir nunca más en un sociedad tan injusto. Quería ser libre de todo esto.

Yo: Pepa, ¿qué estabas pensando cuando diste el gazpacho a toda le gente?
Pepa: ¡Yo no quería pensar más en los problemas de todos! Todos las personas en mi vida quieren decirme “no puedes” y “no importo” y yo he dicho “si” y “ok” para bastante tiempo... También simplemente no sabía que hacer. ¡Yo no quería comportarme bien nunca más!

Yo: Rosario Ferré, ¿qué es un símbolo muy importante en la cuenta “La muñeca menor”?
Rosario Ferré: Un símbolo muy importante... hay tantos. Por supuesto hay la muñeca. Pero me prefiere hablar de sus ojos, pienso que es más importante. El marido sacó los ojos y entonces... ella no puede hacer nada. Cuando él tenía suficiente poder y ella estaba suficiente ciega que él puede hacerlo, puede sacar los ojos, ya ella no tiene nada para esperar. Es el fin del pequeña libertad que tenía ella cuando, al menos, puede ver los injustos. En nuestro sociedad, los hombres asegurar que las mujeres no tienen nada de la esperanza. Eso es casarse.

Yo: Rosario Tijeras, ¿a quien le ama más, Emilio o Antonio?
Rosario Tijeras: Emilio. No... Antonio. Pero no... pues... Emilio. ¿Porque no puedo salir con los dos?

Después de la entrevista, pensé mucho en los papeles de género y en las vidas de las mujeres. Aun que cada mujer tenía perspectiva diferente, me di cuenta de que hay algunos temas en todas las respuestas. Las mujeres quieren ser fuertes, pero dicen que es muy difícil ser fuerte entre el papel  de la mujer. Parece que “fuerte” es parte del papel del hombre. Las mujeres no deben tener emociones fuertes ni voces altos. Y ellas no quieren conformar al papel de la mujer. Quieren ser fuertes más que quieren ser puras. Y estoy de acuerdo con ellas. Con mis artículos, quiero cambiar los opiniones de la gente. Escribo porque tengo opiniones fuertes, como Rosario Ferré y Alfonsina Storni. Entonces no soy “femenina” en la manera muy estereotípica. Pero si usamos la palabra “femenina” para describir Alfonsina Storni, Pepa, Rosario Ferré, y Rosario Tijeras, yo también puedo ser femenina. •
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Reflexion 3: Bestiario por Julio Cortezar

Posted by Sofia Frank-Fischer in Spanish Literature - Gierke on Monday, March 28, 2011 at 8:41 pm
Leer Bestario por Julio Cortezar no es fácil, pero al mismo tiempo no es bastante difícil. Hay muchas palabras que no entiendo, y cuando estoy cansada o no puedo enfocar, es muy difícil comprender el texto. Cuando es posible enfocar en el libro, me gusta mucho leer, y no es muy difícil. Me gusta que las cuentas son breves porque cuando no entiendo uno puedo leer dos veces. Cuando he leído el fin de una cuenta, ya conozco las temas y los nombres, entonces es más fácil entender el principio. Cuando no conozco bien el vocabulario, usualmente busco las palabras en el internet o un diccionario. Me gusta escribir las palabras nuevas en una hoja o, si puedo, en el libro. A veces, no busco la palabra porque puedo entender usando el contexto o otras palabras similares que conozco.
Me gusta mucho aprender español por leer novelas y otras cosas, como poemas. Muchas veces yo leo una frase que no conozco y entonces puedo usarla. Me ayuda mucho con mi gramática y vocabulario, pero es mucho mas divertido que usar "flashcards".
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Quarter 3 Benchmark Reflection

Posted by Sofia Frank-Fischer in Spanish Literature - Gierke on Monday, March 28, 2011 at 4:09 am
I chose to create an interview. I chose a few characters and people we'd come across in our unit on feminism. I then chose various questions to ask to each of the interviewees. The essential question had to do with "voces femininas" and how women are portrayed in Hispanic societies, so I showed the voices, as I imagined them, of actual feminists and also a various characters.
By doing this project, I learned a lot about the two feminists I used for the project. I had to read about them and read a bit of their work in order to get a good idea of their voices. I also had to think a lot about the two characters I used. One was a girl from a telenovela and the other was from "Mujeres al Borde de un Ataque de Nervios". In order to write about those two characters, I had to think about how the movie and the telenovela portrayed women.
I feel that I did well in my project. I'm proud of how I made each character sound different. I also think that my project was both informative and funny, and I'm proud of that. If I could do the whole thing again, I would probably add in a bit of conversation about the Spanish language itself.
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Five-Photo Stories: Immigration

Posted by Sofia Frank-Fischer in American History - Laufenberg on Thursday, March 17, 2011 at 3:18 pm


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Bestiario: La Segunda Reflexion

Posted by Sofia Frank-Fischer in Spanish Literature - Gierke on Sunday, March 13, 2011 at 8:00 pm
Mi libro es un buen ejemplo de "magical realism". Todas las cuentas se tratan de emociones y personajes realistas, pero las situaciones son fantásticos - no mucho, pero un poco. Estoy empezando ahora una cuenta sobre una mujer quien a veces sienta los emociones de otra mujer, una mujer muy lejos. Ya no entiendo porque ni quien es la otra, pero yo se que afecta mucho la vida de la mujer. Pienso que los autores hispánicos (y de otras países también) utilizan "magical realism" porque es una manera en que puede cambiar la situación y entonces los entonces los emociones de los personajes. Es como una exploración de los emociones, usando situaciones que son un poco fantásticos.
Tags: gierke, espanol5, bestiario, mi-novela, reflexion2, 2011, sfrank-fischer
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Papeles de genero: Almdovar contra telenovelas

Posted by Sofia Frank-Fischer in Spanish Literature - Gierke on Monday, March 7, 2011 at 7:27 am
A Pedro Almodóvar le gusta subvertir las definiciones más convencionales del género en sus películas. ¿Estás de acuerdo? ¿Por qué?
Si, estoy de acuerdo. La película empezó con unas mujeres muy débiles - o parece así - y unos hombres muy calmas. Pero durante la película, los papeles cambiaron. Al final, los hombres parecen locos y emocionales, mientras las mujeres están en control de la acción.

En tu opinión y en tus experiencias, ¿cuál es el género de tomar acción y hacer cambios? ¿y según Almodóvar? ¿y según tus telenovelas?
En mi experiencias, los dos géneros toman acción y hacen cambios. No importa el género, sino el tipo de persona. En Almodóvar, al menos en Mujeres al borde de un ataque de nervios, las mujeres - quienes son los personajes más importantes - toman acción y hacen cambios. Los hombres lo hace también, pero no tanto. En mi telenovela, hay una mujer quien toma acción y hace cambios. Salvo ella, solo los hombres toman acción y hacen cambios.

¿Cómo son diferentes las representaciones de género en Mujeres al borde de un ataque de nervios y la telenovela popular que miras en clase?
En los dos, las mujeres parecen controlados por los emociones. Un diferencia es que en la telenovela, la mujer es fuerte exteriormente pero a dentro no tanto, mientras las mujeres en la película de Almodóvar parecen débiles pero a dentro son fuertes. Los hombres en los dos siempre quieren salir con una mujer – o muchas. Pero en la telenovela, pueden usar las mujeres y ellas no hacen nada, mientras en Almodóvar las mujeres, al final, toman acción contra el comportamiento de los hombres.
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Quarter Three NHD Benchmark: Gay Rights

Posted by Sofia Frank-Fischer in American History - Laufenberg on Friday, March 4, 2011 at 9:10 am
Maxime, Julia and I worked together to create this website about the history of gay rights.

I have always been interested in gay rights. I have deep beliefs about the topic and feel personally connected to it, partly because the laws concerning gays have changed so much within my lifetime. I didn't know much about the history, but I was constantly hearing on the news about changes. Also, I knew that it was clearly a debate, so it fit the NHD requirements.
At first, our group chose to create a website. My part was the Prezi and also the conclusion. I wanted to do a Prezi because the idea of a zooming time seemed like a good one and I wanted to try to make one. Once the three of us created our website, we realized that it would not fit the requirements for a National History Day website. Mostly, that was because we had too much video in the site. We realized that our video was easily convertible to a documentary. For our actual submission, we created a documentary.
We ran into trouble with this project when we realized that our product did not fit the requirements for National History Day. I personally had some trouble trying to fit our information into matching circles in the Prezi timeline: some of the events seemed too complicated and others too simple.
Our website turned out well. We all added to it - about evenly - and it ended up looking like the hard work of three people. Not only was it aesthetically pleasing, it also contained all the information we wanted it to contain. I think that my Prezi turned out quite well, too.
I would read the rules for a website much more carefully. Then, knowing about all the restrictions, we would be able to decide between creating a website and creating a documentary. I think that I would have wanted to make a documentary originally. If we had known earlier, I could have made a Prezi that was more suited for use in a video. We also could have put more effort into the documentary and not have wasted time on the website.
I learned that the debate about gays in the military does not go as far back as I thought and that it was much more than just an argument back and forth about whether or not gays should be allowed in the military. There were other aspects to the debate, such as the Solomon decision. I also am able to clearly understand how the laws have changed recently. I learned more about creating Prezis, which is always interesting. I also got a bit more experience with how to deal with suddenly having to change a product. I had to format my project to meet imposed guidelines, which is a skill I will certainly need to have for the rest of my life.
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Bestiario, por Julio Cortezar

Posted by Sofia Frank-Fischer in Spanish Literature - Gierke on Wednesday, February 23, 2011 at 5:01 pm
​Bestiario es un libro de cuentos cortos de Julio Cortezar. Los cuentos son de fantasía. Yo he leído los primeros dos. El primer cuento se trata de una casa encantada, y el segunda de una mujer quien vomita conejitos. Me gustan mucho los dos que he leído, aun que son muy extraños. Creo que todos los cuentos son extraños - es el estilo de Cortezar.
Me gusta que los cuentos toman lugar en nuestro mundo; no son en otro mundo de fantasía. Aun eso, hay elementos de fantasía en el texto. Los elementos son pequeños pero tienen efectos grandes en las vidas de las personajes. Por ejemplo, la mujer quien vomita conejitos no puede quedar en una casa porque no tiene lugar donde puede guardar los conejitos.
Me gusta también que hay algunos descripciones que son muy familiares. Por eso, puedo relacionar con los personajes en el libro.
El libro no tiene una trama importante o grande, entonces no lo recomiendo para gente quien necesita el suspenso o el acción para quedar con un libro. Para la gente a quien no importa mucho la trama, recomiendo el libro.
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Frank-Fischer Contrapublicidades: Oreo y Herbal Essences

Posted by Sofia Frank-Fischer in Spanish Literature - Gierke on Monday, January 10, 2011 at 7:28 am
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Seleccioné el anuncio de Herbal porque me di cuenta de que el anuncio tiene muchas suposiciones sobre la gente, específicamente las mujeres jóvenes quienes son la pública meta. También seleccioné el anuncio porque yo uso Herbal y quería pensar mas en la marca. Se puede ver en el anuncio que la marca tiene muchos valores relacionados con la vida de mujeres jóvenes in el sociedad. La mujer en el anuncio es bonita en la manera aceptada por sociedad – ella es delgada y parece “sexy”. Las palabras debajo del anuncio dice que, si usa los productos, sentirá “como una estrella de rock.” Hay muchos problemas con esta frase. Primero, hay la suposición que las emociones de mujeres – como se sientan – depende en como se ven. Segundo, hay la suposición que es buena cosa ser una estrella de rock – que para ser feliz hay que ser famosa y rica como las estrellas de rock. Los dos juntos dicen a las mujeres que deben conformar a sociedad y las mujeres famosas. Eso anuncio, para un tipo de champú se llama “tousle me softly” es dirigida a las mujeres en SLA porque muchas de ellas, como la mayoridad de muchachas, quieren ser “bonitas” y usan champú.

El problema con el anuncio es que no dice como esos suposiciones pueden afectar las mujeres. Con mi contrapublicidad, traté escribir más claramente cuales suposiciones son en el anuncio para mostrar al público que esos anuncios manipulan mujeres. Hice la mayoría de los cambios al texto del anuncio. En vez de decir “con tecnología Touch Hold”, dice “con tecnología de manipulación.” En vez de decir “Ondas ligeramente rebeldes para un look con tanta …actitud que te sentirás como una estrella de rock,” dice “porque si no quieres ser fea y aburrida necesitas ser rebelde …y para ser rebelde necesitas llevar eso pelo para conformar.” Escribí eso porque anuncios siempre dicen que mujeres deben ser esa o esta o otra cosa. Entonces pone explícitamente en mi contrapublicidad que la marca esta diciendo eso a las mujeres. Si las mujeres se dan cuenta de que el anuncio utiliza la manipulación, pueden escapar. Hice uno otro cambio – usé “photoshop” para cambiar el ojo de la mujer para que ella parece hipnotizada. Eso quiere decir aun que ella es “bonita” es también muy manipulada por parte de Herbal y la sociedad.

El anuncio desagradase con varios valores de SLA y de mi. Un valor de SLA es la investigación. En vez de investigar que es la belleza y que piensa sociedad y porque, el anuncio quiere que mujeres no investiguen nada y simplemente usan el champú. Un valor mío es que hay muchas maneras en que se puede ser feliz. El anuncio dice que mujeres necesitan conformar a las ideas de la belleza para ser feliz.

Quiero poner mi contrapublicidad en el cuarto de baño (de mujeres). En el cuarto de baño, hay espejos y mujeres están pensando en sus aspectos. La contrapublicidad ganará la atención por el ojo y si las mujeres lean ellas pensarán mas en como la sociedad las manipula. Por eso, será afectiva.
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Seleccioné el anuncio de Oreo porque pensaba que es ridículo usar el valor de familia para vender cosas – especialmente una galleta. A la marca de Oreo, no le importa el concepta de la familia, entonces porque la usan en los anuncios? La usan porque saben que familia es muy importante para padres (específicamente madres en ese anuncio), y padres son el publico meta. Los estudiantes en SLA no son el publico meta del anuncio, pero nos afecta porque también comen y el anuncio puede recordarse a sus memorias de comer Oreo cuando eran niños. Los valores en el anuncio se tratan de la familia, incluyendo un relación “normal” entre una madre y su hijo. Dice que las galletas – es azúcar – es manera en que se puede ser feliz, y eso es un valor muy americano. El problema es que las galletas no son una manera buena para ser feliz; después de comer una galleta, siempre querrá comer más y, eventualmente se sentirá enferma.

En mi contrapublicidad, traté de mostrar el efecto real del azúcar: cuando se come, uno quiere más y más, y cuando niños comen demasiado, la galleta convierte en cosa muy importante en su vida. Por eso, hice cambios al texto de el anuncio y lo que es escrito ‘por el niño’. En vez de “ayer, le enseñé a mamá comer un Oreo,” escribí “ayer, le dije a mamá que se amo más el Oreo.” Eso muestra mejor el efecto que tiene el azúcar en los prioridades de niños. Cambié las tres etapas de comer un Oreo a:

1. Come

2. Come más

3. Pota


Esa lista muestra que niños siempre quieren más y más de las galletas, hasta que enfermaron. También cambié la sonrisa de la mamá a un ceño. El cambio final que hice es un texto pequeño debajo de donde dice “OREO”. En vez de decir “la galleta favorita de leche,” puse “la galleta favorita de las caries.”
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The Curtis Institute

Posted by Sofia Frank-Fischer in American History - Laufenberg on Monday, November 15, 2010 at 12:30 pm

Click here to view the Googlesites website that Marina Stuart and I created. The annotated bibliography is on that website, along with the story that Marina wrote on the main page and the additional informational pages that both of us wrote together. The videos that I made are embedded in the website, but can also be watched here:


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Election Day, Nov. 2010!

Posted by Sofia Frank-Fischer in American History - Laufenberg on Tuesday, November 2, 2010 at 4:47 pm
I spent the day with my mom, who had to walk from polling place to polling place. She has the job of Polling Place Inspector. As we walked in between, we had a banner, balloons, and "I Voted Today" stickers to hand out to people. It was a lot of fun. I got a few interviews, some of them videotaped. My computer isn't cooperating with me, however, so here are the various answers people gave to the various questions:

1. What motivated you to come out and vote?
--"I'm a citizen, and voting gives me the right to complain."
--"My husband does, and I help him at the polls."
--"Civic duty"

2. Do you vote every election?
--"I would like to see a bit of cooperation in the senate, and I'd like to see the country moving forward. I would like to see campaigns that are focused on the issues as opposed to personality - I think this year has been among the worst in memory in terms of negative campaigns, and as a citizen, I am disgusted."

3. Do you vote in every election?
--Everyone answered yes.

4. Do you know why we vote on Tuesday?
--Everyone answered no.

5. Where have you encountered the highest amount of ad campaigning?
--Everyone answered the same: "television."

6. What was the most memorable campaign ad that you have encountered?
--"Onoroto - because of his face. He said his name a way no one else did. Aside from that, a murky blur of mud. They all have the same attacking formula. It shouldn't be so personal - it's been made into a personal thing. To antagonize people and direct so much negative energy into the campaign ordeal changes the environment. The whole point is that we're trying to work together. Every campaign is like, 'this guy said he was for this thing. But he's not, he's a bad person.' It's like a judgement."
--"Positive memory: Sestak's dog, the one with his dog. Negative memory: everything Toomey's done, including his face."
--"Obama's whole campaign because I never thought I'd see that happen."

7. Are you always sure of who you are going to vote for when you walk into the booth?
--Everyone answered yes.

8. What changes do you hope to see in Philadelphia (not necessarily as a result of this election, but maybe.)
--"I want the city to get cleaner."

9. What impact do you feel that your vote will have on the election?
--"It can't hurt!"

10. Did you learn about voting in school? Did that impact how you feel about voting?
--"No, I didn't - and that impacted my willingness to vote. You can't really issue your opinion if you're uneducated. You have to be aware of how the system works and what problems are even present to begin to address them. So everything I didn't learn in high school - I was pretty disappointed in how much I didn't know about the politicians and their policies. That made me want to get more involved because there are so many people in my position who aren't educated when it comes to politics and government."
--"No, but I don't wish I did. Voting is disappointing - either my side looses, or my side wins and doesn't do everything I wish they would."
--"Yes, but it didn't really have an impact."


While I did not get pictures of myself with balloons or posters (in retrospect, that would have been funny), here are some photos from the day:

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Because four different divisions vote in the same place at my local polling place, there is a sign directing people where to go depending on where they live. There's even a nice little map!

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Here's a screenshot from the video I took while interviewing two poll workers for a division close to my house. The woman on the left is the mother of Hannah Feldman! If you look closely, you can see the "I Voted Today" stickers they both have on. My mom gave those stickers to a lot of different polling places in her ward, and we gave out even more when we were walking around.

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Outside the polling place, lots of signs. It's inside because the entire polling place is located in the Warwick hotel, on the third floor. Those signs are on the third floor, but only right out side the elevators - not down the hall towards where people vote.
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