And then it was black Posted by Thomas Wallison in English 3 · Pahomov · B Band on Monday, June 5, 2017 at 11:11 pm https://docs.google.com/document/d/1urOY-0MlyWhdB3JwExSCZkEIdRVrlNzOn5EKL-CCZfA Comments (2) Mekhi Friend The use of second person in your story made me want to keep reading . I liked the way you set up the world for the story to work. Sopheary Sok I like that you used 2nd POV and the flow. The sci-fi part world out smoothly. It made me think about how we can fool our own brains into believing a certain thing. Log in to post a comment.
Mekhi Friend The use of second person in your story made me want to keep reading . I liked the way you set up the world for the story to work.
Sopheary Sok I like that you used 2nd POV and the flow. The sci-fi part world out smoothly. It made me think about how we can fool our own brains into believing a certain thing.
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