Anita Patterson - Refran
Refran: Vengo de Venezuela y yo vengo de Pensilvana ahora estamos junta cantando de Roxborough en donde vivimos. De día y de noche celebramos y cantamos se vaya. Ya..ya lo sabes todo en Roxborough todos son locos. Pero ahí tiempos que todos se cambian..silenció..oscuro..las calles vacías. Pero esto es Roxborough en donde vivimos.
- Share the first version of your refrán.
- What is your refrán supposed to communicate?
- The refran shows what we do in Roxobrough.
- What are you especially happy about with your first draft?
- I like the flow.
- What would you like to improve about your refrán first draft?
- I would like to shorten it.
- What was difficult about writing your refrán?
- Keeping in tempo.
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