Hi, your project is very organized and the colors are good. Very eye-catching. You did a good job emulating the author because I saw all the elements just from reading. Very good.
your scene has some grammatical errors but i was still able to understand your interpretation of your elements. i liked your transition from the narrator's thoughts to his father screaming at him and their dispute. I also like the reflection in between the dialogue that gives readers a sense of what the narrator feels.
This handbook was really good! Your emulation scene was very interesting. I like how you used good figurative language in your story, it made it more interesting. I liked your design, It was simple yet very pleasing to the eye.
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