I really liked the descriptive language in this story, at the 4th section of the story really made me feel as if I was in the story itself, and The third person POV was really helpful
I really like all the descriptions, it makes the story much more intriguing. I also really like the change of perspectives. It's interesting how the narration of Londyn's story goes from 1st person (Londyn talking) to 3rd person (author narration). I can totally picture this story being a really good movie.
I really enjoyed how the story had multiple narrators because it allowed the reader to have a deeper understanding of several characters and know their backstories. This really helped justify their actions and why they were doing what they were doing. Also, the plot was really creative and it made me want to read more the farther into the story I got, making me very invested in what was going to happen next.
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