I like how this story had comedic elements that probably weren't intended. It did a good job of rising up to the big action parts, and using the latter part of the story to explain Alex's erratic behavior. You took an element of Feed and made it your own.
This story was interesting to read. It was unpredictable, and flowed smoothly throughout. I especially liked the scene at Starbucks, when Alex was talking to himself, but then had the audacity to ask why people think he's crazy. I laughed.
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