I really like the layout of the pictures
The text on the slides are very clear
The voice over is nice
the transitons are smooth
The pictures are crisp and sharp.
Recomendations
Maybe try resizing it, sometimes the title gets cut off
Slow down the changing of slides
I like how your slideshow is the proper length of time, unlike some of the other people. The sentences and phrases use proper grammar/spelling. The slides are very well designed. The dialogue shows a lot of thought. The images are clean and not blurry. I think that you could have added a little more description about the place. Also, it is sometimes hard to read the words on the slide when something of the same color of the font is behind it.
Hi,
nice job with the layout and slide time. gave me enough time to read everything at a good pace.
next time, speed it up a little just to add more enthusiasm.
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