El Proyecto

What I understood was that her name is Ana-Maria and she is 14 years old. She likes photography. She loves taking pictures. Her photography teacher name is Mr. Herman. Her friend Jamie is smart and fun. He is 15 years old. He likes pictures.

I liked how fluent the video was and I was able to hear and understand everything that was being said.

I suggest to make sure that some of the awkward silences were cut out some way.

I understood that you are talking about photography and how you enjoy photography class and how you were cold when you were outside. I liked how the audio was nice and not too fast. I suggest that some pauses were reccorded but overall I like this. Good Job!

I understood that you were a famous photographer, and this video would be able to talk about all of the pictures that you have taken so far.You also started freezing while you were outside, so someone gave you their jacket. The audio was very nice and clean. I could hear everything that you said. Your pronunciation was also very good. I suggest that you could try and re-record it, so that the pauses didn't take up a long frame of time. There were times where we would be left with a long moment of silence.