Loved that you mention the author quite often, also the way your annotations were so organized and very well thought. Something that I learned how sentence structure is a big thing for novels like yours because it makes the book a lot interesting and for younger kids alil challenging.
I really liked your analysis of the book and of the elements. I think the little graphics made the book look really pretty. Your summary of the book was clear, I might even read it.
I learned that you don't have to provide all information in a story in order to make it cohesive. Your emulation was short and broken up, but I could still follow what was happening. Well done.
I learned that it is important to have a sentence length that goes with your character's feelings and thoughts, because it makes you sympathize with them more, and feel what they're feeling. I liked that you kept a consistent flow within your color scheme, and also the elements were very nicely organized, without clutter.
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