Your creative scene is very well written. You included all of your elements (section titles, first-person point of view, and the narration style) were in your story. I liked the design of your handbook as the colors went very well together and it looked professional.
your senses was clear i understood the elements, i like how you emulated your author and went in depth with your explanations. i noticed the first page had an title section.
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