The colors and the arrows from your emulation to the annotations were amazing. The format was clear and pleasing to the eye. Your emulation exemplifies your Author style by being very descriptive, being told from a first-person narrative, and by drastically switching the focus of the scene.
I loved how vibrant the colors were, immediately attracted me. the font also played a huge role in appearance. the way you went into detail when explaining and backing up each element was excellent. your writing was beautiful!
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