What I understood was that a girl name is Juana. Her hair is pink and yesterday she went to the store and she said that she is crazy. Last week she went to central Philadelphia she went with her mother and father and they took the train. They ate hamburgers and fries.
I liked the music it wasn’t distracting to what was being said. I also liked the pictures.
I understood that you were describing hwanna and how she is crazy and have pink hair which you like.
I liked how the audio was not too fast.
I suggest that maybe a little bit faster will get rid of some pause.
I understand that your friend, Juana (???), is very crazy, and she also has pink hair. Since you're one of her multiple friends, you all like her pink hair as well.
The audio was very clear, and I could hear everything you said. I liked how you took your time to say multiple things so that we could have a moment to take it in.
I suggest that you don’t go TOO slow. Awkward pauses in the video are bad.
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