Far from the tree creative Project

Kara this is so good, I love how you decided to write in Milly's perspective. If there was more, I probably would've read it all. Love it.

I really liked adding Millys point view and I think it would make the story better and I thought Milly wanting to find Max was a good idea. I feel like millys situation could sort of be a repeat of how the sibling met.

While I was only able to read the first page, this is absolutely amazing. The way you incorporated her meaning of family and the way she's struggled to define it is so awesome!

I really liked how your first paragraph makes the reader want to read more especially because of how you chose to do like a continuation from Milly's perspective.