This is such an amazing and unique idea, and you bring it to life really well. It's so cool how you used the newspaper format, and at the end, everything looks really, really neat. I'm honestly impressed by this since this is a really unique and cool idea that you chose to do! Very nice job!
I like how it does look kind of like a news article. You also included a lot of colors and pictures which helped grab my attention and look through all of it. Also, I loved that advertisement.
OMG this is such an awesome idea and you executed it so well! I love how you tell a story by using direct quotes as if you were a journalist. Plus the insomnia purchase that you brought into the letter as an advertisement was such a nice touch! Awesome job!!
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