I really like how you had ended the essay with a question because it letts the reader think about what they just read and how how it affects them. It was very interesting reading about your relationship with your mother. I now think about what really is family if it's not what we generally think. As for the writing I thought that your writing down of thoughts throughout the essay was very intriguing. It was amazing being able to see how you had wanted something to play out verses how it actually did. Seeing this relationship really gives a new perspective on what family really is.
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