Incidents on an Interdimensional Trolley

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Mohamed Bah (Student 2018)
Mohamed Bah

Agatha's story was a cool way to look into the psyche of a person. If you went into the not so far future and got to see yourself, you'd get to experience the past you meeting the future you then the future you meeting the past you. I'm not a fan of over-explaining elements, but there should have been more time put into the interdimensional trolley itself. The aliens too. Besides the fact they were aliens, they could easily not be aliens. Make them more characteristic and more purposefully implemented.