Lost Prophet

Posted by Sarith Chuon in English 3 · Pahomov · A Band on Monday, June 5, 2017 at 10:46 pm

https://docs.google.com/a/scienceleadership.org/document/d/1zmvBFs-MqrbRna92iFwy7bncYr6Pup_Fvuqv96_LSBE/edit?usp=sharing

Comments (3)

Tito Mazzucchi

The idea of constantly changing the setting and environment around the main character really played well into the story you wrote. While reading I found myself looking at the plot through new angles multiple times. I really did like the end where the glitch revealed what was happening and I am glad the story is not just a happily ever after but rather is more realistic.

Claire Byrnes

I thought your explanation of the prophets was excellent. Kaius's journey into the future was very comical at some points and the ending was a great twist. I'm also curious about your ending…

Paul-Ann Whyte

Wow! That was an adventure! I really like the concept behind this story. It's really good. There were points that I didn't understand what is happening but that kept me reading and want to know more. Now I'm really wondering, why did you end it the way you did? Like there were many options but you had him kill himself. Wow. Why?