Marina Pyfrom's Song
fiesta de rock!
De dónde vengo yo
Vamos
2X
Its a fun song. I want the refrain to be easy and simple so my audience can sing too. My chorus will set the stage for the verses.
Yes because it is catchy which means audience can quickly catch on and sing.
Maybe add another line into. I haven't decided yet because I kind of like it the way it already is.
Just trying to make the lines catchy especially in spanish and just making it flow throughout the song.
My first verse tells a little about where I'm from but goes in more about my mother.
I like the first too lines because the rhyme scheme and also the message.
I wanna take more about my mom and our relationship. So there will be more lines added.
The most difficult part is answering the question in an intelligent Spanish 3 student way. Being that our vocabulary is limited we can not say what we want to make the song great. So we have to do the best we can and hope for the best.
My second first talks about my family and its characteristics.
I love my second verse because the message is perfect for the essential question and its rhymes successfully.
I think I want to make this my first verse just because It answers the question more and just simply amazing.
I had no difficulty this verse because I let my mind wonder and did not pressure myself with the rhyming. It just came to my brain and I loved it so I used it.
De dónde vengo yo
Vamos
2X
Its a fun song. I want the refrain to be easy and simple so my audience can sing too. My chorus will set the stage for the verses.
Yes because it is catchy which means audience can quickly catch on and sing.
Maybe add another line into. I haven't decided yet because I kind of like it the way it already is.
Just trying to make the lines catchy especially in spanish and just making it flow throughout the song.
Yo escucha sirenas de la policía.
sueños ser una bailarina.
Vivo con Mi mamá .
no drama
Ella es importante y muy elegante.
Mi casa es en Filadelphia
sueños ser una bailarina.
Vivo con Mi mamá .
no drama
Ella es importante y muy elegante.
Mi casa es en Filadelphia
My first verse tells a little about where I'm from but goes in more about my mother.
I like the first too lines because the rhyme scheme and also the message.
I wanna take more about my mom and our relationship. So there will be more lines added.
The most difficult part is answering the question in an intelligent Spanish 3 student way. Being that our vocabulary is limited we can not say what we want to make the song great. So we have to do the best we can and hope for the best.
Yo vengo de una familia.
Me gusta que mi familia es pequeña.
Tenemos una relacion buena.
Una vez al año hay reunión
Por que tradición.
Me gusta que mi familia es pequeña.
Tenemos una relacion buena.
Una vez al año hay reunión
Por que tradición.
My second first talks about my family and its characteristics.
I love my second verse because the message is perfect for the essential question and its rhymes successfully.
I think I want to make this my first verse just because It answers the question more and just simply amazing.
I had no difficulty this verse because I let my mind wonder and did not pressure myself with the rhyming. It just came to my brain and I loved it so I used it.
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