Comments (2)

Gregory Tasik (Student 2019)
Gregory Tasik

Your monologue is really well done Kamil! You encapsulated the typical teenager voice and your speaker really came to life because of that. I also really like how your character had an internal conflict that was slowly revealed as the conversation went on. :)

Bronwyn Goldschneider (Student 2019)
Bronwyn Goldschneider

I really liked your monologue. I felt a connection to your speaker because of how he transformed from beginning to end. You draw your readers in with a character that is somewhat controversial at first, but likeable in the end.