Your monologue is really well done Kamil! You encapsulated the typical teenager voice and your speaker really came to life because of that. I also really like how your character had an internal conflict that was slowly revealed as the conversation went on. :)
I really liked your monologue. I felt a connection to your speaker because of how he transformed from beginning to end. You draw your readers in with a character that is somewhat controversial at first, but likeable in the end.
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