My Understanding of Complex Vocabulary


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Otter Jung-Allen (Student 2017)
Otter Jung-Allen
  1. Something that grabbed me about this essay was the beginning anecdote. It was very well written, straightforward, realistic and flowed easily. It hooked me into the story!

  2. Something that I learned about you from this essay, Ben, was that you are rarely embarrassed when it comes to not knowing things because you are generally humble. You explained it very well, so I understood everything perfectly!

  3. If there was one thing I could add to this, it would be another anecdote to support your thesis further. But otherwise it was very good! Great job.