Reflection two

Hm. Well, I'm beginning to think I might be going about this wrong. Instead of using twitter to tell my story, I just made a twitter for my character where he posts about his recovery. I guess this is still doing it correctly though. The only problem is that I can't straight up say the events that happened in my story. I have to sort of let my character realize them and post what his thoughts and reactions to these realizations. This makes the storyline very vague. I don't really like it being so vague and not having a clear set of events. I'm not really sure why I let this happen. However, if I say the things that are happening straight out, then the character will feel fake. It makes it really difficult since my character doesn't actually know what's going on from his amnesia. I think my mistake was writing the story in third person and then trying to retell it in first person.