filadelphia es muy importante en mi vida

mejor amigos y muy actividades

What is your refrán supposed to communicate?

My Refran is supposed to communicate my feeling about philadelphia as my home as a whole.
What are you especially happy about with your first draft?
I worked on it so i know what i want to say, even though it's not complete
What would you like to improve about your refrán first draft?
More wording, As well as a stronger grasp of the spanish vocab and the question.
What was difficult about writing your refrán?
Before i wrote it down i wasn't sure how i was going to go about this project. Now that I wrote something it will be easier for me to revise.