Refran

Posted by Cheyenne Pagan in Spanish 3 - Gierke on

​Perdo de menos mi casa
la energía, la energía,
Nueva York
Un día volveré
Perdo de menos mi casa
el ruido, el ruido
música para mis oídos

  • What is your refrán supposed to communicate? 
    It's supposed to communicate what I love about the place I was born. Even though I live in Philly I consider New York my home. 

  • What are you especially happy about with your first draft?
    That it has good content and that it does resemble all those things in seven short lines. 

  • What would you like to improve about your refrán first draft?
    I would like to make it sound more musical and take a look at the rhyming words in spanish and try to incorporate that in to the entire song without losing the meaning that I want it to have. 

  • What was difficult about writing your refrán? 
    I don't think anything was particularly difficult about writing it but it's only my first draft and revising it is going to be the hardest part. 

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