Bea, your essay was really great! I thought that the system and message you spoke about was a great choice. I completely agree with you when you talk about being comfortable in your own skin. You told the story very well. Great job! (and yes, you definitely are a more empowered woman; never change!)
I found your essay very interesting and relatable. I think it's a good reflection on the social system of how people present themselves and how different generations react to one another. I like how you reacted to the situation knowledgeably and stayed firm to how you felt would prove a point.
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