So Tired

i also agree with what tibor said and what you opened up with this perspective and how we saw certain things in the book

I think that the perspective that you took was really defining from other perspectives that you could have taken. i like the language that you use with old pete. -tibor

I thought this perspective was really creative. I appreciated the acknowledgment given to the other chronics that don't really have a say. I liked where you said "I was born dead" because it really brought an insight to the viewers.