I notice that in the beginning a lot of stuff in emilia's story was more often implied rather then said right off the bat. But toward the end of the first as it was getting reveal that she was a lot more crazy then we originally thought she was, the story became more sporadic in its story telling and started being less descriptive to show that her mental was breaking down. Overall the tone of these storyś was more less dark and serious to represent humans when they are more primitive.
One thing I noticed was that there were two different styles of writing. Tahseen had longer paragraphs where as Milan has smaller ones. I think this was good because after reading a longer section the shorter paragraphs helped keep your attention. The story was compelling and had some surprises. Great job!
i notice Milan uses a lot of imagery which I really enjoyed reading. The journey this took me on was intense, you see how people act when in need which I guess also shows something about human nature. and how people look out for themselves when in crisis.
I like where the story is going so far. I also enjoyed the detailed different perspectives showcased in the story to give the reader different views on things from the authors.
I really like the different perspectives on this world, I think it's interesting that the characters have nothing to do with each other. I think the switching between pov's is a very stylized choice and I really like how each author chose. For example, Milan's character is very self centered, and is written in first person, so you end up reading the word "I" a lot which is very fitting for her character. On the other hand, Ezra's character is very selfless and we do not read the word "I" because it is written in third person.
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