The Animal Within

Comments (4)

Wedage DeSilva (Student 2019)
Wedage DeSilva

I liked how you established your introduction. I thought the entire story was going to be in Africa but I was shocked that it took place in the modern world. I enjoyed your story with the plot structure and Curtis being a badass! FOR WAKAKKAKANDA!

Alan Li (Student 2019)
Alan Li

I like the way the introduction was written at the beginning of the story. Based on the setting of the story, I think the use of exposition in the form of dialogue can be reminiscent of traditional storytelling where one person would pass stories orally. Because of that, I think this story did extraordinarily well in its presentation.