The Animal Within Posted by Tyreek Speedwell in English 3 · Pahomov · A Band on Thursday, May 31, 2018 at 9:12 am https://docs.google.com/document/d/1HZUIHemzGfLvpYpKvjAOnzmetrOBjmj1j5EntXxFUCc/edit?usp=sharing Comments (4) Dayanna Hughes Great intro! Wedage DeSilva I liked how you established your introduction. I thought the entire story was going to be in Africa but I was shocked that it took place in the modern world. I enjoyed your story with the plot structure and Curtis being a badass! FOR WAKAKKAKANDA! Alan Li I like the way the introduction was written at the beginning of the story. Based on the setting of the story, I think the use of exposition in the form of dialogue can be reminiscent of traditional storytelling where one person would pass stories orally. Because of that, I think this story did extraordinarily well in its presentation. Raymond Rochester-Pitts I really like how you had a story told within the story and also pointed out where the insperation of the super hero you made cam from. Really nice story. Log in to post a comment.