The story was very interesting and pretty funny. You did a great job on explaining the different dimensions so the science fiction did work. Some deep thoughts I am thinking after reading this is the decisions people make in their life that can change everything and even one life.
I really enjoyed the element of time travel and thought that the newly wed couple created some comical relief. I think it wasn't confusing because you explained the different dimensions in a simple way. I would have preferred that the ending was more drawn out.
The story was great, it touched into some realistic situations, with a science fiction touch. I was confused a couple of times, but I was able to solve it on my own, and I also felt like the ending wasn't as good as I expect it to be.
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