The Sunset Wind

Posted by Angel Keav in English 1 · Giknis · Y Band on Monday, October 24, 2022 at 2:59 am

Hey, this is my multi-narrative story, “The Sunset Wind.” I made this one how I like most of my stories, emotional. It’s about 2 brothers Mack and Dylan. Mack had an accident and went into a coma. After 3 years he wakes up. Now he has to cope with losing 3 years of his life.

Angel's English Benckmark_ The Sunset Wind

Comments (2)

Ryan Suprijanto

At the start and the middle it was very depressing. I liked the ending it's very heart warming.

Fiona Shi

If your story had a tag, it would be 'hurt no comfort'. It's really good but also very depressing. I love it lol.