Comments (2)

Claire Byrnes (Student 2018)
Claire Byrnes

Good job! My favorite part of this is the tension increasing to the big reveal. I thought the main character's stream of consciousness was very believable which made me feel empathetic. I thought the character's powers were believable but the whole different dimension thing was slightly confusing to me.

Paul-Ann Whyte (Student 2018)
Paul-Ann Whyte

I've watched your story evolve and I have to say that it turned out really well. Your dynamic ideas and plot twist makes the story very entertaining. This worked really well although I wished you would have expanded a bit more on the whole another dimension thing. Other than that I loved it.