Touch Posted by Cindy Chen in English 3 · Pahomov · A Band on Monday, June 5, 2017 at 7:26 pm https://docs.google.com/a/scienceleadership.org/document/d/1JKrje1QW4tRu9XfZbyz5IvKii5VVN8HCgnsirXOQTI8/edit?usp=sharing Comments (2) Claire Byrnes Good job! My favorite part of this is the tension increasing to the big reveal. I thought the main character's stream of consciousness was very believable which made me feel empathetic. I thought the character's powers were believable but the whole different dimension thing was slightly confusing to me. Paul-Ann Whyte I've watched your story evolve and I have to say that it turned out really well. Your dynamic ideas and plot twist makes the story very entertaining. This worked really well although I wished you would have expanded a bit more on the whole another dimension thing. Other than that I loved it. Log in to post a comment.