Virus X Posted by Waverly O'Neal in English 3 · Pahomov · A Band on Thursday, May 31, 2018 at 2:00 pm https://docs.google.com/document/d/1EewtxExToLHqOTKTpep3b--I07FKuyeVvDNzSNaD7Tk/edit?usp=sharing Comments (3) Julia Hood Your story had a really good transition throughout the whole thing, it flowed. It was also interesting. Tyreek Speedwell The story was interesting. I could clearly picture every scene as if I were there in it. Alexandrea Rivera The dialogue was pretty good. I liked the way that your story flowed good job! Log in to post a comment.
Julia Hood Your story had a really good transition throughout the whole thing, it flowed. It was also interesting.
Tyreek Speedwell The story was interesting. I could clearly picture every scene as if I were there in it.
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