My New Keynote
This is my updated keynote. Before i had too many pictures spaced out along with many words. I felt as though the pictures were a huge distraction, so i decided to make a collage.
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Slides
Why changed my slides?
My first slide was more words and less me. I didn't to bore people with words so I made my slide so it can just get to the main point. In the old slide I tried to balance out my slide using from what presentation Zen said. In my new slide I used ideas from presentation Zen to made it simple trying to make 1 point. I changed the background to make my images and text to stand out more. I spread out all my information so it wouldn't be so crowded.
My first slide was more words and less me. I didn't to bore people with words so I made my slide so it can just get to the main point. In the old slide I tried to balance out my slide using from what presentation Zen said. In my new slide I used ideas from presentation Zen to made it simple trying to make 1 point. I changed the background to make my images and text to stand out more. I spread out all my information so it wouldn't be so crowded.
Roberto Abazoski: Before and After
I changed my slide because there were too many words on it. I needed to make it simpler, so I did. On the new slide, I took what I thought was the best line from the old slide. Then, I put my name in white to contrast from the red and black theme. Also, I made the words bigger to pop out.
The new and approved slide
The reason why I had to changed my slide is because i had to many pictures and words. But with the new slide it uses a new element but it has the same mine set that it is simply easy to understand stand.
Final Slide
I changed the design because the other one was over crowded, and had to much. This one is straight to the point.
Michael Roth's Slide
I didn't make many changes because my original incorporated a lot of important artistic elements, and the idea of making the viewer "look left" to inspire their action and a large "REMEMBER THIS" sign would help the viewer remember it. The changes that I did make was to get rid of the "Me" text at the top, because it distracted from the slide itself. I also removed both exclamation points from the other two text boxes, as they weren't necessary. I also made "REMEMBER THIS" larger, and added a color shadow to make it pop out more. I kept the top two pictures because they have a nice contrast to each other, and to the background. I also changed the length and space between the letters of "LOOK LEFT."
Franky
I realy didnt CHANGE ANYYTHING
First slide
Slides
My first slide I used aspects of design I learned from presentations zen, such as "One slide, one point", and empty space.
My second slide I kept the same images and words, but I made the word bigger, and I made the background black to add more contrast.
AWESOME ME !!!!
Less words more pictures to explain me
