21/9 Ahorita

At the UPenn meeting in the library 

Vengo de risa ,
desde el personas  loca  ,
tengo a sonrisa ,
esto es mi famila

  • What is your refrán supposed to communicate? 
    Well it tells a little bit about how i view where i live.
  • What are you especially happy about with your first draft?
    NO i think i need to work on my grammar because it sounds weird when it is translated back to english .
  • What would you like to improve about your refrán first draft?
    I need better grammar and more rhyming 
  • What was difficult about writing your refrán?
    It was hard to rhyme everything.