21/9 Ahorita
Vengo de risa ,
desde el personas loca ,
tengo a sonrisa ,
esto es mi famila
desde el personas loca ,
tengo a sonrisa ,
esto es mi famila
- What is your refrán supposed to communicate?
Well it tells a little bit about how i view where i live. - What are you especially happy about with your first draft?
NO i think i need to work on my grammar because it sounds weird when it is translated back to english . - What would you like to improve about your refrán first draft?
I need better grammar and more rhyming - What was difficult about writing your refrán?
It was hard to rhyme everything.
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