Broken Promise

Oh, finally, I’m home, it’s been a long day, I’m so tired. ( Tings...) I hope that is Tris, he is going to make me feel better. ( Open the phone ) “ Hey Maitea, I think the time has come to say goodbye, I’m sorry.”

(Call) Tris? Hello? I know you are there Tris, answer me? Tris? What is going on? Please stop ignore me. (Hang up) 

(Voice Mail) “Hello, this is Tris voicemail, sorry I’m currently unable to take your call. Please leave your message and I will get back to you as soon as possible.  
Tris?  What is going on love? Why are you ignore me? I know you’re there Tris, pick up the phone.

(Thought) What is going on? Why did he break up with me? Did I do something wrong? 

(Voice Mail) “Hello, this is Tris voicemail, sorry I’m currently unable to take your call. Please leave your message and I will contact you as soon as possible”
Tris? Please, I know you’re there, pick up the phone love, stop ignoring me. What’s going on? I don’t know what I did wrong, but at least give me a second chance Tris. I always gave you a chance to apologize. Why are you doing this to me, Tris?  Remember all of the promises? You said you going to be with me no matter what, you said you will love me until the day we die, you said I’m your only girl, Tris? Please, talk to me. 

(Voice Mail) “Hello, this is Tris voicemail, sorry I’m currently unable to take your call. Please leave your message and I will get back to you as soon as possible.”
Tris? I know you’re there, we need to talk, this cannot be happening right now. Tris, is it because of her? Is she better than me or something? Did I not treat you the way that you wanted it to be? Tris? Please.. Pick up the phone!
 
(Voice Mail) “Hello, this is Tris voicemail, sorry I’m currently unable to take your call. Please leave your message and I will get back to you as soon as possible.” 
Well, I guess, that’s it, you left me for someone else, I notice that since you met her, I thought you will be better than this, I guess you’re just like other guys. Hope you have a great time with her Tris…I love you.

(Thought)I’m really mad at him, but I can’t show it out because I love him so much. I just want best things to happen for us, but why it has to be so hard. You know, love never last forever, we were dating for 4 years, but because of the third person, he only knows her for a month, but he decided pushes me away because of her. It always starts with something sweet and ends with hurt. All of the promises, nothing were true, nothing… just absolutely nothing…. The more you trust them, the more pain you will get later on. Love is painful.

Comments (2)

Mamadou Samassa (Student 2020)
Mamadou Samassa

It's very interesting that you used the phone to your advantage, it's really great how the phone keeps on ringing and ringing then you finally come to a conclusion, that Tris left you.