Carolina Latorre Espaol-3
Vengo de Venezuela y yo vengo de Pensilvana ahora estamos junta cantando de Roxborough en donde vivimos. De día y de noche celebramos y cantamos se vaya. Ya..ya lo sabes todo en Roxborough todos son locos. Pero ahí tiempos que todos se cambian..silenció..oscuro..las calles vacías. Pero esto es Roxborough en donde vivimos.
- What is your refrán supposed to communicate?
Where we came from and how Roxborought look in our eyes. - What are you especially happy about with your first draft?
I finished it and at first it sound good. - What would you like to improve about your refrán first draft?
I like to change what it's suppose to talk about. what I want it to be is the view point/difference between venezuela and philadelphia. - What was difficult about writing your refrán?
Thinking about what it will be talking about.
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