Cheatley's Slide Part 2

Posted by Andrew Cheatley in Technology - Freshman · Hull · d2 Band on Wednesday, December 21, 2016 at 8:57 am

I didn't make that many changes but the things that were changed were the ones people told me to. One thing that I changed was the font color. At first it was a salmon pink color now it is a honey yellow. Research is a very important thing in this project. This is because this project isn't about how well the slide looks, it's if it makes sense and it all works well.

Reflection

Some things that I learned with this is how to really work on design. Not just the work. I made about two or three changes in my slide. The first slide had an salmon pink color for the font word. I thought that because it is a different color than usual it would help stick out. But my audience said it should be a different color. A brighter color. So I made it an light yellow. My other change was an seperation bar I had in there. They were right, it served no purpose. So I took it off. If you didn’t research you probably would’ve lost a lot of extra points. Some that you would've wanted.

Comments (9)

Octavain Davis

This slide really works because in my opinion the pics. You have an non-living object controlling a living being. It also shows the problem today´s society faces, the internet. This slide is just so true.

Asnain Khan

This slide works well because the colors contrast with the background and your text font is big enough for people to see. Just remember not to put so many words, it's not that attractive if you put too many words. Overall great job. 85.

Shaheed Williams

The font is hard to read because of the bright tv screen. I would change the font color and reduce the amount of words.

Shaheed Williams

The font is hard to read because of the bright tv screen. I would change the font color and reduce the amount of words.

Donald Moses

I dont think the changes you made to the font works well as it did with the pink salmon color but it is kind of better but I think the font should be a neon red color in my opinion

Louisa Strohm

The color of the font still isn't really noticeable so I really think you should change that. Other than that I wouldn't change anything else.

Shyann Davis

The text color could be a darker color because it really matched with your background This was a very creative piece. 95 is what I'm giving you.

Kyla Gladney-Enos

I think you should change the font color because I can't really read the text because of the light coming off of the television. I like the background picture. It's very creative and strange. I'm giving you a 95.

Sara Frunzi

I would again change the font and text color because you can't really read it. There's also a lot of text, which makes for bad glance media. Overall, I'm giving you an 85.