Earth: Far and Sick Posted by Afi Koffi in English 3 on Friday, June 1, 2018 at 8:08 am https://docs.google.com/document/d/1IwNZjb38HeNZK2Je60bTOpCMfjJtFcbxgjuJZZd2RPo/edit?usp=sharing Comments (3) Zaire Williams I really enjoyed your story, I was going to stop reading to look at someone else's but it was too good. I was curious about what was going to happen next. I also thought the message was very powerful. Darlenny Rodriguez I really like this, it was very interesting and I like how you didn't tell us everything off the bat, instead, as we read, the pieces came together. The ending was great and I like how you based it off of real world scenarios. Naima DeBrest I like how you took a different approach and told the story in the first person. The element of diary entries also made the story more interesting. Log in to post a comment.