I understood that you were talking about your friends and family. I liked your pictures and you spoke clear a little bit. I suggest speaking clearly next time.
I understood him saying that Perry and Christian are his best friends. They played football at the park.
I liked how he was detailed about the pictures.
I suggest him to speak louder in some pictures and proof read the paragraphs looking for some grammatical mistakes and wrong words. Also, to slow down.
I understand in your first picture you were mainly describing your friends and yourself.
I liked the way you took your pictures
I suggest to have more of a clear audio because I was having trouble understanding what you were saying.
I understood that his friend is nice and kind. Justin is funny. When they went to center city they saw a statue that was very old. They played football when they were at the park.
I liked how you took us through a day with your friends.
I suggest that you make sure that your voice isn’t clear and static.
I understood that you and your friends are all from different places?? That’s all I could make out from the beginning. I also understood that once you guys left the park, you saw the American flag, and there was also a statue in the park.
I liked your pictures, they were really nice, and I’m also a bit jealous
I suggest that you fix the audio a bit. It’s a bit cracky and I can’t make out some of the words that you’re saying
I understood that your friends are Christinal, Barry, Russel and Johnathon. Johnathon is something. Barry and Christian is your best friend. A statue of Russel? Russel is very crazy?
I liked your photos
I suggest that you work on your audio.
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