It looks like you put a lot of time and effort into your project. At times the setup gets a little confusing. I noticed that you had two sections for narration as an element. other than that you clearly know what you are talking about, you give a lot of detail and explanations.
Your project was very colorful and creative. It matched the funniness of the book you're reading. Every page had something to look at. Basically, everything with color stood out. I thought about a story being expressed by a comic book.
Your hand book was very interesting and creative. You used lots of details in Emulation and also lots of colors which made it pop out and made read what was written
I like how your font and background varies in size and color. I do like the table of contents. It was interesting to read. I too was able to learn what it was like to live in the Middle East in the 80s. Good job!
I really liked how you formatted the project. I learned about how living in the Middle East may have been in the 80s. Your dedication to the project is evident in how much content there is.
I love the different color schemes going on in your project. It makes you look very intriguing (which you are). I didn't know you wanted to be a basketball player :)
This was really creative and it really gave the readers attention to what they were reading. At least for me some people may get distracted or lost with all the different color patterns. Try to make the color scheme a little more organized but over all really creative and you give a lot of plot of your story including your elements.
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