Yor emulation scene was good. I like how you wrote your scene in a similar way in the book. Reading your scene, we can see what the character is thinking about and we can learn about his characteristics.
The three elements were apparent in your emulation. And you did a nice job of choosing a theme that wasn't boring but at the same time wasn't distracting.
this book is one of my favorites ever, and i think that you did a great job emulating the author's writing. you really wrote in the author's style and created a solid story as well.
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