Emulating Susanna Kaysen - McCreary

Comments (6)

Julia Dunn (Student 2021)
Julia Dunn

I love how your handbook is laid out! It's simple and super easy to follow. Your emulation was also so well done. Your handbook made me want to read this!

Akossiwa Koffi (Student 2021)
Akossiwa Koffi

Your elements were chapter titles, unreliable narration, and the use of dialogue. In your creative scene, you used a chapter title that had to do with the main theme in the chapter. You used an appropriate amount of dialogue and an unreliable narrator who doubts everything anyone says. The scene was also a very interesting anecdote. I also enjoyed reading about your author and why she wrote the book. Knowing that makes me really want to read the book.

Iman Ahmed (Student 2021)
Iman Ahmed

This handbook was well thought out. The quotes were explained and broken down very thoroughly I really appreciated the picture that was used for the "About Me" section, they were not like most pictures for that area. Great Job!

Kankoue Folly (Student 2021)
Kankoue Folly

You did an amazing job with this your project was well put together it was very organized and the grammar was perfect. There were no spelling errors and the way you transitioned from topic to topic was swell, I also think that you did a really good job given the biographies while making them brief.