Emulation Handbook - Ethan Friedman

Comments (4)

Brielle Thompson (Student 2021)
Brielle Thompson

l love your design and how it isn't as colorful but it is still well put. As far as the elements you did a great job. The way you set your scene up was the way you explained the author did

Stephen Semine (Student 2021)
Stephen Semine

I really like how you emulated your book. I clearly saw how you connected your elements, but I think your emulation scene should have been bigger, because after you finish your scene I felt disappointed, because I thought that your plot is bigger, but still in this small emulation connections with your book are clearly seen. I like the design of the paragraphs, but I don't like your picture selection. You could have found some pictures which would be more suitable for your handbook (quality of picture and size). After all, it's a great handbook! Good job.

Brielle Thompson (Student 2021)
Brielle Thompson

l love your design and how it isn't as colorful but it is still well put. As far as the elements you did a great job. The way you set your scene up was the way you explained the author did