You do an excellent job of incorporating images and drawings into the beginning of your handbook. It sets the stage for the reader, allowing them to get a sense of your writing style. You also have an interesting emulation story that you could build upon, if that is something you would like to do.
I feel as though you did a great job emulating your author. The three elements, comma usage, use of chronological order and Reliable sources, were all incorporated clearly in your scene. I enjoyed the color choices used in your handbook, they were pleasing to the eye.
I enjoyed your first element chronology and how you was able to point out the order of the book. The design was formatted and placed right . You were able to defend the author of the use of not going in chronological order.
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