Wow I love the way this went. I did a 10 years later chapter too and I took in a completely different way. It amazing to see other ways they could have ended up.
I feel like half of this should be in the actual book — it was so interesting to read. I like how you wrote it like it was in the book, with different sections for each character. & I loved the cliffhanger at the end, because it makes me curious about what will happen next!
It was really interesting to see all of the relationship questions being answered with Grace and Rafe, and Maya and Claire, because the book didn't really confirm if they got together. I really liked the cliff hanger because it made me wanna read more of your writing!
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