How Im Jewish

Some of my inspirations that made me write this essay was born a crime. Trevors style inspired me because his details in some of the most minute things made me want to translate that into my own essay. I think his style impacted me mainly with the finer parts and how he puts the stories into bite sizes chunks. I tried to convey my culture by explaining how I got there and all of the types of it. I would love to use humor in my memoir because it makes it a more enjoyable expense but I am not great at humor and It would probably just turn out a flop and a face pawn so I did not include it. Alo I felt like the style of my essay would not fit into the humor section. Noah showed his identity by sharing stories of his life with foreshadowing the entire way. I tried to do the same of the small story part but did not know how to do the foreshadowing. I believe that my vignette addressed one of the essay questions because it is about finding your identity and that the question was about identity. I think it would not be enough to just show one story because no one event makes up your identity. For me, It was what part of Judaism I was from. For others, it might be what sport to play or joining a friend group. I thought one dissection just made you say ok let’s play basketball but instead a lot of little decisions that made you want to play basketball. Overall I think that born a crime had a very big aspect on my memoir. Form structure to details I think It made me a better writer.