I feel as if you had a lot of information and there was a lot of background but there really wasn't like a main topic, like something that i could like be like oh this is the reform, reaction, etc.
I think that your project would be a lot easier to understand if there was some more background information. It made it hard to follow since I'm not too sure what the topic is covering. Also, try to connect/relate your different articles somehow (subtly).
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